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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My oh my! The possibilites are just swimming around in my mind. This is going to just get better and better! I am hooked now I cant wait to read more so please dont torture me. Update ASAP !!! I LOVE when Hermione was drunk and said \" Your place or mine ? \" to Severus. I can just imagine the look on his face! It gave me quite a chuckle to think of Severus Snape being shocked and speechless!!! I love where this is going. I also got a little teary at Ron asking Harry if the Weasleys could adopt him officially. I must admit that has been something I have wanted to happen since the end of \" Goblet of Fire \" when Mrs Weasley hugged him and he cried into her shoulder after he returned with Cedric Diggory\'s body. I am really looking forward to reading more. * kudos * You are doing a great job!
~ Jaimie ~
schedule
April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, thanks.
schedule
April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I almost forgot I was reading this. I\'m glad you updated for us. So, Hermione and Severus staying in the same cottage for the summer? They are also attracted to each other? Sounds like a potentially lemony situation. Please don\'t keep us waiting too long. Thanks foe woe wonderful chapter.
schedule
March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! now it\'s getting juicy! can\'t wait for more! hurry and update! aloha, mele
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I was looking at the latest fics here today, glanced at the title, and thought, \"Hmmm, must\'ve read a bit of this earlier--title is familiar.\" So I started reading the 4th chapter, thinking, \"God, this is good!\" and then it hit me--\"Shark\'s fic! This is Shark\'s fic!\" So there you have it: even before I knew it was by you, I knew it was \"darned\" good. (\"Darned\" in honor of the prudes on certain other fic networks...) I think you do an excellent job with Snape here--delicious mix of snark, sneer, shyness and a certain mmmmmrowr sex appeal--and your Hermione is very believable. (God, if I\'d have made a drunken pass at some of my teacher crushes--*shudders with horror for Hermione\'s morning-after memories*) The scene exit--touching her cheek and leaving--creates a wonderful sense of tension between the two. I look forward to more!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Please update again soon.
Tiffany
Tiffany
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very, very nice story!! Please continie writing it, because I\'m very curious about the rest of the story!
Sweets
Sweets
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fun chapter. I can only image the sloppy kiss Hermione gave Severus. No one that drunk kisses well. I feel bad for Hermione. Sounded like a vicious hangover.
Write more soon.
Cheers.
Write more soon.
Cheers.
schedule
March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, it\'d be good if you could make the chapters a bit longer but i\'ll watch out for more.
schedule
March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start to a good story. I\'m intrigued by this one, so I hope to read more of it soon. You did a good job setting up the characterization for this story and I didn\'t see any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors. So you\'re good to go!
Ciao!
Ciao!