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for Beneath the Surface

by Sharkdiver

person magicalwonder
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It always saddens me greatly when Hermione and Severus fight. But even more it really aggrevates me to no end that her friends would do something childish on her behalf, even though she would never act that way herself. All in all, it is a good sign, it means that you have written an excellent story. One I hope will be continued soon. Great job.
person daygonna
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter. i really hope that u will update again and soon. this is such a great story
person Jessie Deal
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful story. When I saw your name I couldn\'t resist and read it as fast as I could get to it. (I remeber reading your wrok from the Lab fandom).
I was so right in my decision. Excellent story. I will be waiting for more.
Goodluck with the exams (nice to see another science student. I had almost given up hope)
person Ajna Starheart
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really love this fic, but I\'m desperate for more and it just stops as things are getting truly interesting......What\'s the idea? Where is the rest? Come on ! Email me with a link to where I can find more of this intelligent tesing story.... Ajna.
person ds
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy you updated! It\'s been so long I almost gave up on this story! Please don\'t make us loyal readers wait too long for the next update!
person CC
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update or im gonna die of suspense.
person DS
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooo glad you updated! It's been forever! I can't wait for the "big date." ^_^
person ada
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again, LOVE IT!!!!! Keep up the great work! :)
person ancientgirl
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I tried to review last night but the site was being uncooperative. Great chapter. I'm so glad you haven't left this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Are you going to let us intrude on their date? I hope so. I like how he is realizing he is attracted to her, and its so cute how she is trying to get his attention. Please don'ep uep us waiting so long again for another chapter, this is really such a nice story.
person Truth
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to assume that you gave up on this story. I'm s tha that you decided to. You really should update more in the future.