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Oooo....I was hooked as soon as I began reading...I hope that you don\'t stop after *just* two chapters...

So what do you think? Perhaps we will find out how Severus came to be so obsessed? Review, tell me if this is good, bad or mediocre. Is it pretentious drivel? Is it beautifully twisted? Or just a steaming pile of shite?

It\'s more than good, it is very good indeed. Complex feelings put in beautifully simple but lucid and well used language - it\'s a relief to see someone using simple yet strong expression. That, to me, is the opposite of pretention - pretention merely shows off, and irritates this particular reader. Your story so far has a good deal of power and raw emotion. I\'d enjoy reading more.

And most definitely NOT steaming pile of shite, and if anyone says so, please allow me to thump them on your behalf.

Chapter 2... I am typing through tears so please know that your hope has been realized, what you have written in this chapter has most definitely been written well enough to be affecting!!! HOLY MY, this is so very sad & you have done an AMAZING job with your words!!!

May I share with you what I hope?!? I hope for more!!! It is my hope that the screaming & sobbing that he hears is Hermione, there in time to save not only his life, but his entire being!!!

I do so wish that you will go on with this & I am sure that you can tell I am wishing for a hopeful continuation!!! I do know that not all stories have a happy ending, but being the hopeful romantic that I am I can\'t help but wish for one here, he deserves happiness to end his pain!!!

Just in case that you can\'t tell how much I am impressed by your work..... Throall all of the hurt & pain, the difficult subject matter, you have written ONE HELL of a BRILLIANT piece of work here!!! Still hoping for you to turn this into a multi-chaptered masterpiece, Deb >^..^<

Your writing is beautiful! I love Severus and this is exactly as I imagine his mind to work, you\'ve done a wonderful portray of him! Are there going to be more chapters? I hope so!

Actually, I\'m reminded of Humbert\'s longing for Lolita rather than anything Shakespearean. Very interesting, very poetic ... Although I\'ve never been one for SS/HG. Even though I knew it was coming, seeing her name was a \"damn it!\" moment for me.

must... continue.... *sobs*

What poignant and sad musing of a tortured soul obsessed with something unattainable (or so he thinks?). Absolutely beautiful beginning. Could shape up to be a wonderful story if you decide to go that way. Works as a very depressing one shot. I would like to see more (but I like this tone--don\'t go too terribly fluffy). It really is beautiful.

Very nice. I do hope you continue with this story. A oneshot is nice, but you can do so much with this. I love fanfics where Snape is all obessed and in love with Hermione! ^^

Amazing story! Beautifully written! I loved every part of it! You should really add more. :)

Seva, PLEEEEEEEEEEASE go on with this story!!! This is AMAZING!!! So many questions to be answered, so many things left to find out!!! My heart is breaking for Severus, PLEEEEEEEEEASE let him find a way to be with his lady love!!! Hoping for a chapter 2, Deb >^..^<