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for Watching Her

by Seva

schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I'm a sucker for the dark, obsessive ones.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods,

I am in tears. I know that kind of pain. I've never quite reached the point of doing anything about it, but I do know that kind of soul-wrenching pain. My heart goes out to him. And he's not even real.
person olivia
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was sooo sad. i really enjoyed reading it, it was really intense. upadte real soon.
person tamarack1pines
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sequel please!(crying jaggedly) I hate unhappy endings...
person tamarack1pines
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sequel please!(crying jaggedly) I hate unhappy endings...
person zenia
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You say \"two chapter - one shot\"... but this needs to be so much more.
person TeaRoses
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is truly great work, one of those stories that makes me sit back and say \"Oh forget it, I could never write like this.\" And I\'m torn between agreeing with those who want to see it continue (as I\'d love to see more of it, happy ending or no) and respecting your evident wish to leave it as a complete work (which it does work well as). It\'s up to you of course. And \"The type of love that has four walls, growing ever closer.\" is a line of brilliance. Writing from Snape\'s POV is gutsy and worked so so well here.
person spaz141
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know what to say...very sad. Thanks.
person Miki
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Were they involved in the past? How did Severus\' obsession begin? Updates please.