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person glossy lips
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK! now you have to continue the story! let me guess, is Draco pregnant? anyways, write on!
person ?
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story and hope to see more soon!
person M.E.
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story.
The plot line is excellent.
It is realistic (Ron not being a teacher)
It is heartwarming (Harry healing Remus)
and makes me a little apprehensive (what does Draco and Harry have to tell each other)
so, if you do choose to send the story by single email include me in the list, if not then keep posting on aff.net
Note: when having the sex scenes, it might make it a little more steamy by having one of the guys graze the other\'s prostate and then have said guy go crazy for more. Just a suggestion
person severusdraco
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really must be praise you, because it is, for the few chapters, a lovely story! I love how you have handled the situation with Snape and Harry and also that Harry is with Draco= I love these two together!!!
person Princess of al that is Azkaban
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, great fic. Very interesting plot so far. So all Harry\'s friends become animagus and Harry himself becomes a Pheonix. It seems that a lot of authors like to put Harry into that role, anyway. Keep writing, it\'s great.
person mikochef22
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey hey, I know I said I would do this before class, but well i didn\'t get UP for class so... yeah lol.... Anywho.... This was a Great! chapter, I was ry woy wondering how Harry and Draco were going to be able to be together when Harry became as Professor....great solution! And Hermoine is there too, poor Ron though, but realistically he wouldn\'t have been there with his grades anyway, some authors would have overlooked that little grade thing, im glad you didn\'t....hope Ron doesn\'t continue to be pissy (?) ...but if I was given the chance to be a animangus I sure as hell would stop with the pouting .... so ..... I wonder what they will be huh? Do you know yet? No No Nevermind, I don\'t want to know till I read it....and I know im putting more here than I usually do, but I didn\'t really get to chat with you last night with my whole drooling in my sleep on the keyboard thing...so im doing it a little here :D ...don\'t worry youll have to indure my prattle later .....So like i said before Great Chapter can\'t wait for more...soon..... Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~> xoxoxo
person mikochef22
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this \"sanded down\" version of Snape,still rough and tough but slightly smoother on the edges, this was a very good chapter and I like the way the two are starting to relate to each other now... the basalisk was a great idea, very interesting, where did Draco go? Was he the one in Snapes office? You know those were retorical questions ill wait for the next post... again great chapter, please update soon, Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
person Ava
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is soo kewl I loved the other ones in this series and i thought that they were also stellar! I do hope that you update soon. and i cant wait to see/read wat is going to happen next
person mikochef22
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was great!! Poor Harry, those memories were bad (very good writing that), even if the first one was off canon, they were all great in showing Snape that Harry was not the \"little Griffindor Price\" he thinks he was, I hate the Dursleys, I think something bad should happen to them, like i don\'t know something bad.. ill think on it.....I can\'t wait to see how Snape reacts to Harry now, knowing him he willbablbably be the same old snarky Snape he always is around other people... but Harry will know the truth, because Snape now knows the truth about Harry. That lemon... well you are going to explain that right?... You know how I love the lemons but that was just strange.. not bad by any means but you you know what im saying right?... Well i\'v said enough here you\'ll get more later of course.... And of course I love your righting... why else whould i bug you about it all the time lol :D .... Update as soon as you can....Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
person ShimmeringOracle
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I really love your stories, and I really REALLY love where this last story is heading. I am very excited to read the rest of the story when you get it done. Ta!