rate_review Reviews

Huzzah! I\'ve been checking in on the story for, oh, ages in anticipation of this glorious day! I\'m sure that whatever you do with Aurora will be great.

Well...*holds out hand* come on, lets have the rest of it then!
Im enjoying it immensely. Bravo!

Me again, one teensy tiny criticism...just a lil un. Tis constructive I promise. Well, I know Aurora is beautiful and everything, but having Ron and every single male in Hogwarts go ga-ga over her is just a tad Mary-Sue-ish. Im sorry, its just that I get the urg rol roll my eyes when you talk about the guys fawning over her.
*cindel notices everyone glaring angrily at her* Well...it says \"review\"!

Okay, alittle awkward reviewing just now(I only just found it through fanfic.com, or I would have before), but I really love this story--please, please update! Is Severus the one being hidden by the dark forces? Does Dumbledor know?(only if he is, obviously) Does Voldemort know?(same) If he is why would the unicorns be willing to act against him? How much does fate have to do with SS & AD?

Well, I\'ve just finished Chapter 9 and I really do hope that you will continue. You write beautifully, your word construction evokes a lot of tension, which is what I strive to do. Thanks for the read!!!

Oh, please don\'t tell me you\'ve stopped writing?!
I did enjoy this story very much so far, and just can\'t believe you leave us hanging here, without telling us, what exactly an \"Untouchable\" is.

I just read your story today. I\'ve been working through a list of Snape romance fanfics and yours is one of the best I\'ve read. I was very taken in by the story and will anxiously await more (though it looks like you haven\'t added any for quite some time--I do hope you\'ll finish). Your original character of Aurora is very strong; I like her. I like the mystery you\'ve built up around her--the \"untouchable;\" and the fact that she is Dumbledore\'s granddaughter, but Snape doesn\'t know--delightful!

Another strong point of your story is the reality you give to Harry/Ron/Hermione. Most of the Snape/OC stories I\'ve read have splashes of the trio (or Harry only) that just don\'t ring true, but your glimpses into their existence in your storyline are very in keeping with how JKR writes them and that makes your story seem all the more plausible and enjoyable.

I also liked the secret school for training against evil wizards and the underground ministry operating without Fudge\'s knowledge.

Now, just because OOtP has been released and puts your story into a somewhat altered universe doesn\'t mean that those of us following it aren\'t still interested in your ideas : ). So please write some more!!!

One last thing, being the Snape fan that I am, I truly loved your image of him in a white pirate shirt! Oo la la!!

Thank you for your story.

Kim (first time reviewer anywhere, your pleas got to me)

i loved it!.... you have me hooked i cant wait to see what happens next!
~Ky

Please, please update this brilliant story! I can\'t stand waiting anngernger!

I have reviewed! Think it is great keeping checking for updates. Please update, Thanks Kim