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for The Harder They Fall

by Flyingegg

person Imhilien
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story so far - I chuckled when the armour was being affected as well!

Keep writing, and good luck finding a job (been there, done that unfortunately)

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7... Now Hooch has bad timing;-) I think Ginny did a good job of trying to tell Neville that being sweet is a GOOD thing!!!

Severus slipped, too bad he caugimseimself!!! I can\'t wait until those 2 are able to take care of business!!!

So, what is it that is wrong with the pumpkin juice, can\'t wait to find out!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
person shaz
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dont do this 2 me!!!! cliffy!!! omg!!!! im gunna die if i dont c the end of this, my only thought is that *wipes brow* this is intense shite!!! its awesom, need more, will die without

hugs shaz
person SamiJo
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved that, I want some more action of SS/HG. Please????
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, another cliffhanger at the end. Oh well, this is a good story so I will let it slide. ^_^

Ciao!
person PotionsMistressM
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I must say I agree with you about real life taking away Severus time! I mean, I haven\'t had time to read this wonderful story for 3 chapters, now! I have to tell you how absolutely much I love this and how wonderful I think it is! And I apologize profusely for not feeding your muse treats more often, but please know that every time I get to read, I will review, and I will give your muse a great big bag of virtual Skittles to help with the id Pl Please keep up the awesome work!
person WriterLady1031
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and funny story! I like it all! You have a veryativative story line here and I am eager to read how it all turns out. Please continue to write and update this story!

Ciao!
person jenocclumency
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh! What a great chapter! I really love this story. :)
person MMiercoles
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She was my favorite author when I was younger! I read the entire Chrestomanci series backwards and forwards, and I loved her stories about Dulcinea Wilkes and the book about Guy Fawkes! Thank you so much for reminding me about that series; I have to go back and re-read now!
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou, egg, for that astonishingly funny chapter...I laughed my head off!
This is a brilliant, brilliant fiction - thank gods Filch is such a gentleman, eh?
Wonderful scene with Ron, had me laughing so loud I woke the kids up....
And as for Hermione and Severus - well, things just got a little hotter, didn\'t they?

Merci beaucoup, Kait x