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for The Harder They Fall

by Flyingegg

person nesscafe
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was cute! I loved every last bit of it! I epsecially loved the end where you told what happened to everyone! Self lubricating cucumbers! LOL!
person Rosmerta
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a perfect ending! Thanks for this delightful little romp!
person Brideofsnape
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really enjoyed reading this. I nearly spurted my wine all over the keyboard with the line about the self lubricating cucumber. That\'s the funniest line I\'ve read in a long time. Well done.
person Loopy Loony Luna
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful finish. I especially appreciated thdingding.
person LoveThePotionsBoy
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, Brilliant, excellent summing up, completely amused all the
way through this utter charm of a tale. It\'s nice to see Minerva getting
some, too. Seriously, no squick, not even a little one. Must be the
way you write \'em.

Egg, you\'re a marvel.

Blessings to all involved in this masterpiece. Kait xxx
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12... THANK YOU for sharing this story, I LOVE IT!!! The ending was PERFECT, everyone got what they wanted except for Fudge, YES!!! I look forward to more from you in the future!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous, funny, witty and sexy.

Thanks for the ride !!

Glinda
person scifichick774
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Brilliant ending. Enjoyed this story all the way through. Well done!
person Susan
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Applause, Applause*!! That was wonderful! Do I smell a sequel at all? Never did find out what happened to Madame Hooch...do she and her broom still see each other? LOL! I really loved this story. Keep writing! :-)
person jenocclumency
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is seriously one of the most enjoyable works of fanfic that I\'ve ever had the pleasure of reading. It kept me laughing, yet still moved me with the level of emotion, and the sex scenes were perfectly done. If every fanfic author could perform as well as you, the fanfic world would be a much better place. I will be looking forward to reading more fanfic stories by you in the future, so keep writing!