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for The Harder They Fall

by Flyingegg

person Kait
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now I\'m very intrigued! A hex that causes some sort of nymphomania AND reverts the hexed to a childlike state? Curio and and Curiouser...

I\'m hanging on your every word. Please update soon!

Blessings, Kait x
person scifichick774
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning. Really looking forward to more. :)
person blonderockchick00
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading a lot before i start reading mine, and i have to say this one is very promising! Not quite what you\'d expect, and very enjoyable!!
i thought it rocked :P and i can\'t wait to read more. . hopefully!, so keep writing!!!
Emm =)
person Kiristeen
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Loved this chapter. : ) Both Severus\' reaction when M. Pomfrey indicated Hermione was contagious and then the ending to the chapter were wonderful.

Of course the trip to the infirmary was a hoot and a half. ::snickers::


Kiri
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2... Things seem to have taken quite a turn here!!! If Hermione is contagious, has she infected Minerva as well? I can\'t wait to find out what is really wrong with her that is making her do the things she is doing!!! Til chapter 3, Deb >^..^<
person Little Miss Cant Be Wrong
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to find out what they gave her...a lust potion mixed with vodka? Hmmmm...wonder what that would do. Please don\'t leave us hanging to long!
person KarenDetroit
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start and interesting premise. Look forward to next installment.
person Amy
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha... McGonagall, that was hilas...s... just too much. I can\'t wait for your next update. This is one hell of a first chapter, I loved it. ^_^
person Stellar Snape
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute so far! And very intriguing. Is Hermione faking it? Can\'t wait for an update!
person Sarah
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really liked this! Hope you update soon--what made her head for Snape and avoid all the obvious hormone-filled candidates surrounding her, hmm?

Two minor points of constructive crit though: first, it\'s Autumn in England, not Fall. Second, Snape saying \"hols\" was a little out of character.

Other than that, great!