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for The Harder They Fall

by Flyingegg

person XxphoenixX
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was going to maome ome terrible joke about the benefits of cutting the sexul tension with a knife vs. just licking it off... but then I realized how bad a joke that was. Forgive me. Now, your Witchfinder General or whatever the hell it was. I\'m guessing.... Diana Moon Glampers? Handicapper General? Harrison Bergeron? Maybe I\'m wrong? Probably. Dunno. At least I tried. Love the story... Ron and his lotion! Poor baby! Snape is so sexy when he\'s barely keeping hold of his control ::growls::ht. ht. Update soon, yes? And am I right? I dunno. I guessed. Do I win?
person Aoibheann
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done!
person iccle mousie the potions ingredient
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"a way out in the name of dulcinea!\"

you got her from Witch Week.

please update soon.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... Lotion & brooms, things are getting even more interesting (of course this probably makes it sound worse than what it should*
person rubberduck
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a very funny story. there\'s mystery involved as well as heaps of sexual tension. anything could happen and it looks like it will. from what hermione has said, it sounds like she\'s the cause of all the school woes. she\'s a naughty naughty girl. perhaps snape should spank her. it\'s an ingenious point that the students can\'t get too close to those they don\'t find attractive. ron\'s reactions to his sister and harry and draco is nice. that way it can\'t be just a free for all. just a free for most. but considering harry and draco were draped all over ginny i\'m guessing those three like each other in some sort of way. do i smell a ginny sandwich sometime? i hope so.
person nesscafe
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gotta tell ya, I\'m enjoying the heck out of this story! I\'m dying to know what the cause of the lust contagion is and what will come of everything! BTW I can\'t wait to try that Strawberry Lemonade recipe! I was wondering what I was going to do w/ those strawberries since I\'m out of cool whip! YUMMY! Strawberry Lemonade sounds good to me!
person n-
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. The premise seemed dodgy to me at first but you have handled it with charm and a deft touch. This story is an absolute joy to read - I have to stop every three words to laugh! You are...mischevious, and I like it. Can\'t wait for more, especially Snape=Granger.
person Ashley
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More More More!! :)
person Kait
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your plots! They twist and turn.....like a.....a twisty turny thing! A right gripping yarn this is turning out to be. I\'m strapped in, ready for the next update which I hope is sooooooooooooon! Blessings, KAit x
person Persia
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Great chapters! (I loooved chapter 4, such a great Hermione/Snape scene!). BTW I copied down the strawberry lemonade recipe and plan to use it as soon as strawberries are in season (they\'re gross when they\'re not).