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for A Dish Served Cold

by Barrie

person pyewacket
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more!!! (please) I absolutely love your writing. \"A Terrible Temptation\" is one of my favorite stories. I have been following it religiously. I am already hooked on this one.
person beeky63
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really loving this so far. Keep up the good work. Update soon please.
person Kim
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Friendlyquark,

Good story so far. Very well written. I\'m looking forward to seeing what else happens in the story.

Kim
person karen/dedanaan
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thi goo good. Their is no love lost or any illusions either. I\'m happy to have found your response to the Marriage Law Challenge. I\'m looking forward to where you\'ll take this next.

person WriterLady1031
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! I really like how the story is developing.

Ciao!
person Rosmerta
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying your story - it\'s always great to see Hermione give it back to the Master of Sarcasm! :) Keep us posted at WIKTT on your updates!
person IrishRa[
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder when the shock of this is going to hit Hermione. Is someone going to find her throwing things around or punching defensless, inanimate objects? I\'m looking forward to reading more!
person Kristy
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh I could really love this story. Please keep it in your mind and write more. It would be a shame to abandon such a promising beginning
person White Lilac
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please! Do never stop yourself when you get an inspiration!
Great family! I mean, great to know about it. Will you make them appear again? Helena must be around Hermione\'s age, it would be interesting to see how they get along... Well, it would be interesting to see how Helena reacts if she ever hears about her oldest brother, to begin with.
person buttercup
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how you manage to turn out so many good stories at the same time. You\'re off to a great start with this one; I can\'t wait to see where you\'re going with it.