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Great. Just GREAT! You just HAD to add another story to the list, didn\'t you? Grrr. ;-P oursourse, it has to be incredible from the start, and get me hooked from the beginning of the first chapter. You just HAD to add to the already long list of the Marriage Law stories that I\'m following, and you had to make it uniquely different from the other ML stories (Already chapter 4 and they\'re not married yet, much less in bed together yet!) PLUS EPU and ATT. Thanks a lot. WHY do you have to be so talented and have such a way with words??

No really, I can\'t wait for the next update! (Or the updates for ATT and EPU, for that matter...There\'s a big hint hint in there somewhere.)

Happy DAY!
Much love,
jordy

This is fast becoming one of my favourite stories of the moment, your writing style is so fluid and intelligent, I love reading what you\'ve written. You do realise that I am now waiting impatiently for your next installment *drums fingers impatiently and looks at the clock on the wall* so no pressure then! You\'ve made the characters and their reactions very believable and I\'m trying to imagine the reaction of the rest of the school and the staff to the wedding announcement. Please do a staffroom scene \'cos lov love to see what your view is on how Severus\'s colleagues would react.

Anywayz... continue with the storytelling :o)

Another great chapter! I really am enjoying this story!!!

Not a bad start. I look forward to seeing where this goes, as I do all your pieces. I found he exchange in the headmaster\'s office to havevery Jane Austen-like qualities. Interesting. I think it was the bit about it not being a love match, but there being time to learn to live with one another. Or it could be my having watched \"Pride and Prejudice\" recently. Who knows?

Just make sure you update all your stories equally, eh?

*sigh* *grin*

Been there, read that ... I mean, those considerations about whom to choose ... but still ... you did it in your very own style and thus made it really enjoyable.
So again I put aside all my vows of avoiding WIPs ... which seemsbecobecome a habit with those written by you - at least one can check daily for updates without being disspointed too often. Thanks for that!

Oh, and a thought popped into my head: If a girl is still at school and married to a teacher, wouldn\'t it be prudent to change schools and finish her education elsewhere ... like ... at Beauxbatons? No? Well, just a thought ...

Good chapter. There won\'t be any confusion further forward about what they were feeling when they got engaged. Can\'t wait to see how you develop this and how everyone will react. I do like to see Dumbledore out-confused by those around him and Im intrigued as to how much of a snake-pit you make the Serpent\'s Den and how Hermione fares in it. Update soon. :o)

Severus was struck by this argument and the image of being married off to Millicent Bulstrode arose in his mind. The vision of her carrying him across the threshold made him blanch.
Hilarious - this chapter had me in stitches basically - him picturing Millicent and himself and Hermione and Mad-Eye was priceless - keep up the good work!

At this moment I have a storng dislike...call it hate... for Severus father.

Vlovelovely set up and teaser. This has such a wonderful variety of possibilities already laid out. Your Snape is not so terribly cruel, and Hermione has such a wonderful degree of common sense. I love the entire section about Hermione\'s parents picketing the Ministry to the complete lack of comprehension of her Professors. I sat chuckling to myself... my kids think I\'m nuts. I will be very happy to follow this story of yours regardless of how often you post.