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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would so love to see Hermione beating the crap out of Severus\' father. I love this story and I hope that you would update it soon.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Severus calling someone else \"old bat\"! I\'m dreading to know his grandmother.
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was something else. Well the last two chapters were. The details and building of the dramatic tension was very good in both chapters. I\'ll be back for more!
Ciao!
Ciao!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How humiliating to have the engagement announced that way, but at least it was tacked on to the rest of the bad news Albus was delive to to the school.
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, as always. Don\'t you get tired of writing well? I certainly get tired of you being so good. NOT!!!
I particularly loved the way you were able remind everyone (characters and readers) of the complete inability of either of the affianced to contest or even choose their mate. I\'m sure there will still be lots of heated debate over Severus and Hermione\'s betrothal but at least Dumbledore has tried to head \'em off at the pass -- for now.
And many, many kisses for putting in my soapbox! Cheered my sickie up to see her goofy old mama doin\' the happy dance. LOL
I particularly loved the way you were able remind everyone (characters and readers) of the complete inability of either of the affianced to contest or even choose their mate. I\'m sure there will still be lots of heated debate over Severus and Hermione\'s betrothal but at least Dumbledore has tried to head \'em off at the pass -- for now.
And many, many kisses for putting in my soapbox! Cheered my sickie up to see her goofy old mama doin\' the happy dance. LOL
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 4 & 5... I really do like your version of this story!!! I like how Hermione gave Harry the basic, can\'t help so drop it when he through his fit!!! I also like the fact that Severus seeo feo feel a bit of compassion towards Hermione & realizes that she is in the same boat as he is!!! I am glad that her friends are being supportive, upset, but there for her anyway!!!
Who will Ginny pick... maybe Harry? I can\'t wait to see who Draco ends up with!!!
Severus\' grandmother sounds AWFUL!!! Hope he won\'t have to put up with her for long, quick wedding, skip the reception, not have to talk to her, that should work for him!!!
Can\'t wait to see what surprises are yet to come!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
Who will Ginny pick... maybe Harry? I can\'t wait to see who Draco ends up with!!!
Severus\' grandmother sounds AWFUL!!! Hope he won\'t have to put up with her for long, quick wedding, skip the reception, not have to talk to her, that should work for him!!!
Can\'t wait to see what surprises are yet to come!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a superb chapter -- the school\'s reactions and the manner in which it was announced. You\'ve managed to bring the entire four houses into the story in an entirely plausible fashion, and managed to deal with hte ostracism issue quite well. The fact that they appraise each other several times is really enticing, and I am eager to see what you choose to do for the Malfoy interference.
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderfully written i am in awe of your talent. I love this challenge and am trying my own humble hand at it, but yours is wonderful, i love the reactions of all the characters, they seem so true. cant wait for the next installment -demos
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! I am so glad Hermione d upd up for herself and Severus. Am bribing with champagne and chocolate if they get out of Dumbledore\'s office. Just kidding, are are the queen of great pacing.
Hugs
susan
Hugs
susan
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will post this here rather than send it personally because it should be public record how very talented I think you are. Once again you have created a universe -- or revealed one to the rest of us -- complete and whole. The charactere tre true to both their origins and their new situations. I find myself captivated and longing for the next chapter. Brava, my dear, brava.