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You have an inconsistency: in the chapter where you have Bill meet him in the marketplace, you call the grandson Yoshua (Yeshua?). But when you have him go into the house, he's referred to as Avram, the spy from Hogwarts. I haven't finished reading what you've posted thus far, but so far I like the story. Just wanted to point out this one issue, and also ask if you had considered going back to fix the first few chapters which were bungled by AFF's server crash.

This is a wonderful story. I read all 40 some chaters in one sitting. Are you still working on this or has it been abandoned?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

So where is the next update ? Hurry ! We are starving for more ! I saw that you have updated on Ashwinder but only up to 37. We need more please hurry !!

WHAT! QUE! WHAT! QUE! Damn, I've seen some crazy plot turns in my years of reading fanfiction, but this one is floating on up there. What kind of marriage proposal was that!...............Very good.;)

Well that took me two days to read but it was worth it. I would have prefered less of the other characters but it is still quite good. I look forward to future chapters if you're still writing it. And considering the time and effort put into it so far I would hope you finish it.

oh my god!!!! u cant leave it there. i have just discovered this story again
and have been reminded how fantastic this story is.
please please please update as soooooon as u can
fantastic writing well done
tracy

Wonderful story! And amazing OC's. You write them so well they dont end up being mary-sues & mary-stus, but they manage to carry the story along well. My favorite just has to be Sabine Snape, amazing woman! And im eager to see more of Violet, im partial, since ive a stubborn toddler that just COULD be a Snape. ;) hopefully your toddler doesnt rip up more notes. At least they werent class notes....... like mine were... LOL.

Chap 1 - 48
I'm totally, utterly fascinated by your tale. A very intriguing, fascinating, enormously inventive tale you're telling us there. I love your new caras, the Yidoni-family, the funny pairings, their serious attempt to cope with their marriages, the great variety of problems each couple has to face, the absolute fantastic proceedings, and last but not least your catching kind of writing!
I'm so very glad that I continued after the first few chaps, because there're a lot of ennoying format errors, and I nearly stopped reading. What a pity that would have been to miss such an amazing story. I'm very much looking forward to your next chaps.

Excellent. Thanks so much for the update.

Truly