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Oh my god! Okay, so I\'m not sure if I\'ve reviewed this yet or not. Perhaps I have. ::shrugs:: Anyway, this is pure brilliance! I love the name Taliesin, btw. You\'ve brushed up on your Welsh mythology, I see. Though he\'s hardly a bard, is he? All wittering aside, I think it\'s excellently ironic that you\'ve just married off Snape\'s sister to Neville LONGBOTTOM of all people! This is going to be a great sidestory and I can\'t wait to see what happens to those poor kids next. Hermione and Snape are getting along well, and I hope for lemons daily since you are part of my daily rounds. I won\'t beg you to update more frequently, but I will bribe your muse. :D

One last thing, please don\'t make Helena a Mary-Sue! Give her some flaws and a temper or something! She\'s a Snape!

Sing

*rotfl*
I\'m trying and failing to imagine Neville becoming Snape\'s step-brother-in-law. Bwahahahahaha!

Another great chapter. You have the ability to make them act believably and everything appears to be well thought through. I am wondering what Lucius\' plans are, though.

LOL - I loved the end, brilliant. Thanks for updating.

Snape as Nevilles \"brother in law\", too too damn funny. A different form of revenge to be sure. I don\'t think I have even read that plot twist anywhere.

Very in character Snape, utterly seamless.

Like the send up on the Malfoy\'s as third ranking family and social climbers.

looking forward to your next wonderful update.

Please Mum, may I have some more? So glad you are feeling well enough to do more writing. I have missed your voice. I didn\'t realize how much until I read this latest chapter. It is one thing to wan kno know what happens next in a story. That is challenging enough for most writers. I always look forward to your personal \"voice\" in the writing. These stories are engaging and well crafted, but as I\'ve said before, create whole universes. Thank you again.

I love tht you used the word \"uber\"! its my fav! Oh, poor neville what\'s he gonna do!? lol

Chapter 9... I\'m glad to see Severus & Hermione getting along so well!!! I\'m looking forward to the wedding as well as finding out what Severus\' reaction will be when he finds out that.....

Neville will be related to him!!! As it is, Neville seemed to be totaly surprised!!! Maybe this will teach him to read things before he signs them;-) At least this will be a good thing for Helena!!!

Looking forward to chapter 10!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<

Brilliant Barrie. The fact that you added Neville to mix is just awesome. He\'s marrying a Snape?
I really should have seen it coming. It\'s just too perfect. (Twittering to self.)

I hope Hermione can pull it off well at her wedding. Is it coming up in the next few chapters? Hope so. Can\'t wait.

Cheers!

Barrie that chapter was wonderful, especially the ending. :)
Jeanette

More please? Soon? Please?

btw, it\'s Jana with 1 N. *grin*