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for A Dish Served Cold

by Barrie

person Ashley
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the twist you took on this challenge! I haven\'t read something with as much detail and characterization in a while...I really hope you locked up those muses because I\'m dying for more!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10... HOLY MY, so much happening to so many!!! I do feel for Hermione, but I hope that she & Severus will be able to have things better than the way Lucius is picturing them!!! Severus\' grandmother sounds like she may still pose a very large problem!!! I hope, for Hermione\'s sake, that Albus will keep her in mind where potential problems are concerned!!!

What did Ginny do?!? I can\'t wait to find out who the spell chose for her!!!

I like how you have Neville thinking the worst about what his future holds in store for him!!! I hope that he will be pleasantly surprised!!!

I am rellay looking forward to chapter 11!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person Anon
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Raija
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that you have many characters and some are almost too much but just almost. Sometimes this is hard to follow but it\'s great anyway.
person Miki
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s just getting better and better. Keep those chappies coming....can\'t wait for the wedding night.
person azulkan2
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Neville as Snapes brother-in-law, that\'s rich. Looking forward to more soon.
person spaz141
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update. Neville too funny. Who did Ginny pick? Yikes this could be bad, really bad.
person IrishRavenX
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was beginning to worry that you had died. Glad to hear that the lungs are back under control, I\'m sure your brain appreciates the oxygen. Good luck with torturing the muse...did it go to Tahiti for awhile, or was it just being uncooperative? Loved the update, especially Neville\'s new part in the plot, poor dear. Hehehehe. I\'m looking forward to another as soon as your muse allows.
person scifichick774
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Geez. Lucius is such a bastard. I adore Neville though.

And the line where Hermione thought no one loved her? I almost cried along with her.
person Raija
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The end was absolutely hilarious. Update soon. I love this.