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ALet Let me tell you again how much I enjoy your writing. I hope you\'re feeling better; nothing like being ill for a really, really long time to put things into perspective. I\'m grateful that you continue to write. Bless those voices in your head!

This is brilliant! I can\'t wait to see what happens on the wedding night ;)

very cute chapter...

SO we are going to get some Lupin action?? I know you can make Lupin pretty hot from some of your other fics. I have not read a GW/RL pairing before. Whats with these gals and older guys??LOL

Loved the part with SS\' hair.

Hmmm is Hagrid going to get hooked up too?

I love that Percy is in charge of all the marriage law correspondence..

Another good chapter! I particularly appreciate that you have the Muggle parents in the picture, reacting as parents would typically react to such a situation. In most Marriage Law fics, the parents are just glossed over, but including them and their efforts to repeal the law gives this story more credibility. And now this is getting even more interesting with Ginny bidding for Lupin - wonder how her marriage with the werewolf will turn out ;)

I liked this chapter. Please keep writing.

What is it about that werewolf? The chicks just love him. (I am actually referring to myself [grins].) Why has Ginny placed a bid for him?

Loved how your Severus realized that Neville will be his brother-in-law. Too funny.

Draco in this fic is a nasty little piece of work, isn\'t he? He\'s off to plot nefarious plans. He should have one of those pencil moustaches so he can twist the ends as he plans.

I could almost feel Hermione and the muggle parents sorrow. It\'s so sad. I hope she finds understanding and acceptance with Severus soon.

Cheers.

Eeep!!

Poor Severus, not knowing he had 2 siblings. That\'s terrible! Also, you have me worried about poor Neville and what\'s in store for him at the hands of Draco thanks to him signing the petition Dumbledore presented him with.

It\'s a review full of sorry feelings. Poor Hermione! I hope the light gets a little more apparent at the end of the tunnel with the aftermath of this Mage age Law.

Chapter 11... I really do feel for the parents!!! They must all feel so badly knowing that they want to protect their children, but being unable to:(

Can\'t wait to see how Ginny reacts when Remus comes to confront her!!! She really got lucky to get him!!!

I very much like all of the interaction between Severus & Minerva in this chapter!!! I think she was the best person to receive the news of his siblings from as well as the news about Neville!!! I also like the fact that she is there helping him prepare for his wedding!!!

I hope that Draco makes the wrong move at the wrong time so that Severus (or Neville, which would even be better) can hex him as much as he deserves!!! That spoiled little prick needs to be knocked down a peg or three!!!

I am also feeling for Hermione here (as well as the others affected by this law)!!! I am glad that she wants to stay & I do hope that she will become one of the select few that will be able to see the compassionate side of Severus!!! I hope that she will come to love him & that their wedding will be the beginning of a wonderful relationship!!!

Looking forward to chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

Thank you!!! An update - Hurrah!!

I like your attention to detail. Makes it more interesting.

I feel so sorry for Severus\' loneliness. Yet at the same time I want to shake him and tell him to stop being a coward and go out there and live.

Anyway...looking out for your great updates.

you keep upping the stakes between all the conniving families.

A plot to kill HG now...

Waiting to see Snapes reaction to Neville\'s marriage contract.

I really have not seen you do Neville in detail, so this story is going to be interesting from that view. Is Neville\'s G-ma going to be around, I\'d love to see her face off with the Snapes.

You have had cliffies after every chapter!