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I thought this chapter was bad, I don\'t know if you got it(the whole wedding ritual) off of someone or thought it up yourself, but I read all I could of it, and just skipped the rest......I really like this story it\'s greatly done except what I\'ve mentioned above, the Neville scene was L.O.L. ........but I just can\'t see the wizarding community going through what you wrote every time someone gets married.
P.S. Keep Hermione very adult like, don\'t have her acting childish, and if you can have her piss off her arogant(sp?) relatives and get away with it!

So nice to see an update. I\'m not sure who I feel more sad for-Hermione or Snape. The ceremony was so vividly detailed-I like that. Makes it so much more real. I just wish they could all be more happy about the whole thing. It\'s supposed to be such a happy experience, and they are all so upset. Especially with hearing about Mr. and Mrs. Weasley\'s ceremony and the giddyness that went along with it. That just made it that much more depressing. :o( I hope that their \'night\' goes better. (At least there won\'t be an upset audience for that! Until next time...

J

Bring on the wedding night.

It was a lovely ceremony. I just wish the marriage was in happier circumstances. It would have been perfect if they were married of their own free will.
I especially liked McGonnagall, Flitwick, Hooch and Sprout representing the four elements. That was neat.
Poor Hermione. I flikelike fleeing the room in her stead. Is she going to break down? I really don\'t see it, even if she feels like it. She\'s just too strong for that.
Cheers dear.

Wow! This is a most amazing story. The plot just keeps thickening! I cannot wait tad mad more.

Hey you. Long time, no see. I just started reading this the other day. I really like it. Some of the wedding stories I\'ve read have been quite lacking. I think this one just might be interesting. I love your style. Well, see ya around.

Great chapter, thanks for the update.

Keep goinweaswease?

You write well and I liked the idea of the parents fighting against the law.

Another great chapter. *sigh* Minerva mothering Severus is priceless!
Still waiting for some Severus-Neville interaction, hehe.