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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffie indeed! And just as you were getting to the \"good stuff.\" ;o) However... Your story is fabulous, you are fabulous, and I look forward to the next update immensely! Keep up the fantastic work!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Brilliant story, but I\'m dying to read the next chapters!!!!!!!!!!
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work - as always!
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Phantastic chapter, again.
While I certainly share the mostly melancholic view on the marriage, my favourite sentence was this one:
Emma felt a surge of pity for Severus Snape well up inside her. The poor man; he would never know what hit him.
Hoping for multiple Garnny action in the next chapter. And then the wedding night, of course ;)
While I certainly share the mostly melancholic view on the marriage, my favourite sentence was this one:
Emma felt a surge of pity for Severus Snape well up inside her. The poor man; he would never know what hit him.
Hoping for multiple Garnny action in the next chapter. And then the wedding night, of course ;)
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Read the wedding chappy last night.
Extremely and wonderfully detailed ceremony. It tht the movement of swishing robes, and the logical procession. I liked the blending of the season and earth element themes.
Somewhat romantic in a detached sense, can\'t explain it otherwise. Also appreaciated the bits of humor laced in the story. \"Snape doesn\'t know what he\'s up against\".
Snapes logical extension of what HG will be like in the future based on seeing her mother was a nice and logical touch.
Snape is remaining in character with his level of annoyance, anger, and snarkiness. Nice subtle touches between HG/SS. Funny they both wanted to snark back at the self satisfied wedding offical. It is OK to dress up Snape in colors other than black, canon says so!
Can\'t wait for the NEXT chapter...someone\'s family member has got to get hexed at the feast, there is just too much tension. SS/HG are under so much stress somethings got to snap soon.
=D Enjoying this very much. Have fun playing \"dark wizards\"
Extremely and wonderfully detailed ceremony. It tht the movement of swishing robes, and the logical procession. I liked the blending of the season and earth element themes.
Somewhat romantic in a detached sense, can\'t explain it otherwise. Also appreaciated the bits of humor laced in the story. \"Snape doesn\'t know what he\'s up against\".
Snapes logical extension of what HG will be like in the future based on seeing her mother was a nice and logical touch.
Snape is remaining in character with his level of annoyance, anger, and snarkiness. Nice subtle touches between HG/SS. Funny they both wanted to snark back at the self satisfied wedding offical. It is OK to dress up Snape in colors other than black, canon says so!
Can\'t wait for the NEXT chapter...someone\'s family member has got to get hexed at the feast, there is just too much tension. SS/HG are under so much stress somethings got to snap soon.
=D Enjoying this very much. Have fun playing \"dark wizards\"
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I am back. Hopefully I will be around more. I love this story so far. The ceremony was very much like one I\'ve been to recently. Two of my dearest friends were maried on Beltane Eve. They have seven children though, and there was a whole big family part to their ceremony. I\'ll be checking for updates, so don\'t dissapoint me.(just kidding)
Blessed Be
Blessed Be
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Your descriptions and details of the marriage ritual was wonderful. I can\'t wait to see how the feast goes ;-)
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very lovely ceremony that reminds me of the substance of a handfasting an acquaintance of mine had. The symbolism was lovely and there was hope woven through it, even though it was such a solemn occasion and lacking the usual joy it should have. I\'m hoping once they begin to talk together as husband and wife that they meet on more common ground and see all the things they have in common and build from there. Of course, there\'s Neville\'s impending connection to come that should wreak some havok. ^_^
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12... You did a FABULOUS job of writing the ceremony!!! I LOVE how both of them would have been happy to beat the priest from the ministry;-) I also like the way that you wrote their internal frustration!!!
What her mom was thinking is exactly what I have been thinking.... Emma felt a surge of pity for Severus Snape well up inside her. The poor man; ouldould never know what hit him. Hermione is a force to be reckoned with!!!
I am looking forward to the feast as well as their wedding night!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<
What her mom was thinking is exactly what I have been thinking.... Emma felt a surge of pity for Severus Snape well up inside her. The poor man; ouldould never know what hit him. Hermione is a force to be reckoned with!!!
I am looking forward to the feast as well as their wedding night!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um - dude? In some cultures, weddings could go on for hours, and the celebrations linked to them could go on for *weeks*. More particularly - in ancient Israel, right, Friendlyquark? At least, I think so. In fact, the idea of different people coming to pick up the bride, other people standing around the groom, and in a highly ritualized way sort of reminds me of bits and pieces of the Psalms and the Song of Songs. Only pagan! :)