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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! just finished reading the first 13 chapters, and they are awesome! Please keep going. And don\'t listen to the people who are impatient, I know how that goes because I have a friend who is writing and tries to get the chapters posted as quickly as possible too. Well keep up the awesome work.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Small quibble, Ginny\'s eyes are brown.
Excellent update, though I\'m miffed you left us hanging at the end! I look forward to more.
Excellent update, though I\'m miffed you left us hanging at the end! I look forward to more.
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an evil cliffhanger! I\'ll forgive you because this story is written so well. Many of Marriage Law stories are rushed, but this one isn\'t at all. You draw out your descriptions of emotions and happenings very well. Keep up the good work, I anxiously await the next chapter!
FlamingosByNight
FlamingosByNight
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Looks like Neville lucked out. hee hee
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Severus and Hermione are going to be fine. I have faith now. He\'s finding her attractive. Now, we need to know more of how she feels about him.
So, Remus is Ginny\'s soul mate. Very interesting.
I\'m so happy for Neville. He deserves it.
(So, how\'s Joe? [tee hee])
So, Remus is Ginny\'s soul mate. Very interesting.
I\'m so happy for Neville. He deserves it.
(So, how\'s Joe? [tee hee])
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MORE PLEASE SOON!
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good heavens, by your warning at the top I\'d thought you were going eaveeave someone in peril or have Hermione running away from Snape into the night or show Death Eaters creeping in. C\'mon, we\'re all adults -- we can wait a bit for the lemons. Anticipation is fun.
Nice first meeting between Neville and Miss Snape. Funny first discussion about sex between Hermione and Snape the elder. Revealing first talk between Lupin and Ginny. Can\'t wait for more.
Nice first meeting between Neville and Miss Snape. Funny first discussion about sex between Hermione and Snape the elder. Revealing first talk between Lupin and Ginny. Can\'t wait for more.
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed chapter 14, but did you maybe post chapter 14 over the top of chapter 13? I wanted to read 13 again, before I read 14 and found 12.
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excelent! simply wonderful. I adore this challenge (which is why i have my own fic on it) and yours is superb! i love the multiple plot lines. this is a dificult feat to manage but i have faith you will do it beautifully. write fast!
-demos
-demos