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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. Once again a really good chapter, I like the way Longbottom is shaping up and really like
Snapes sister!!!
Sometimes when I have a lot of stories in my head I like to completely read the fic all the way through again but only
if the story merits it, yours does, I really liked Hermione's wed nig night (the weddding itself was one of the best i've read)
I would not have put Ginny Weasley with Remus, but on refletion what a explosive combination.
I'm greedy for more so please update soon!!! Voted five stars, for a great fanfic.
Snapes sister!!!
Sometimes when I have a lot of stories in my head I like to completely read the fic all the way through again but only
if the story merits it, yours does, I really liked Hermione's wed nig night (the weddding itself was one of the best i've read)
I would not have put Ginny Weasley with Remus, but on refletion what a explosive combination.
I'm greedy for more so please update soon!!! Voted five stars, for a great fanfic.
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic! More please? And please tell me we may get a side of Ginny/Lupin goodness ;) please... *begs*
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Both serious and humurous, also very well written. I look forward to your next chapter! ^_^
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated! I'm quite enjoying your story. One of the things I really like about it is that it doesn't have Snape and Hermione isolated from the rest of the HP characters. I love a story that includes interactions amongst a variety of characters. I find myself just as interested in the union between Neville/Helena and Remus/Ginny, as I am in Severus/Hermione (although I'm partial to the latter). Now that AFF.net is stable (for now anyway), I hope you'll update more often!
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good. I like Neville Helena and Remus Ginny stories a lot.
With a baby at home, I wont press for update. Glad you manege this one.
With a baby at home, I wont press for update. Glad you manege this one.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All right. I am now thoroughly addicted. Just the right mix----of everything---character development that is true-to-type, main plot vs. sub-plots, angst and sweetness. One thing I just can't WAIT to see----when Severus realizes just how good he's got it, and makes a POINT of THANKING his dad for the wonderful gift! I can just see both he and Hermione realizing it at the same time together, and laughing their heads off at what his father had meant to destroy him. But for now---how to keep her safe from the Death-Eaters---and Voledemort himself---until Voldemort is destroyed? Bring on Chapter 15! Thank you for a wonderful story.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up with all the chapters to this amazing, amazing story last night!
And boy was I glad I caught up at Consummation and not at Confusion! I don\'t think I could have been a patient reader when I got to the end of Csionsion! lol!
Ma\'am, may I say that you are a compelling storyteller? I love the idea of Longbottom as Severus\' bil! The Longbottom-Snape arc was fraught with irony, humour and that frisson of fear as to how Malfoy, third from Merlin, would retaliate. So many layers of irony and hope - that snatching Helena from under Draco\'s nose in that short hou hours, that Longbottom was indeed Helena\'s hero, that Longbottom would finally find his centre in being that protective husband... and Longbottom\'s nightmare wait! lol at the visuals of Granny!Snape! *giggles*
What an amazing, powerful, symbolic wedding you\'ve painted. The four elements were perfect for each of the teachers, as was the ceremony itself - solemn, without frivolity, with much consideration... Whilstls dls dream of a happy beginning in a giggly wedding that Molly described, I feel that the sacred atmosphere of a thoughtful, awesome reverence is more impactful on the parties involved that a marriage is a serious lifechanging event.
The emotions of your story is the foundation of all that you\'ve built. I love the pacing you took to this story, exploring Hermione and Severus\' rage and helplessness about the situation. The feelings that Hermione had about the wedding night, and her emotions on the night itself - perfect rendering, my Storyteller! I love your compassionate and honourable Severus - his brewing of Maiden\'s Ease was a wonderful touch - not many grooms are as thoughtful as Severus of their brides. They might not be in love, but their unselfishness towards the other party is sometimes more considerate than immature lovers\' considerations for their partners. Oh, and how Severus was rewarded with a 17 year-old lover! Hermione\'s determined study turned to the bedroom is a wonderful reward for Severus\' years of unloved loneliness. I love how even on the marriagebed, you\'ve kept your Severus in perfect form! \'I suppose I could fit it into my schedule\', indeed. *snorts*
Like Severus, I get the growing feeling thhe che couple are in the eye of a storm - and this growing tension is all due your skills at weaving this story into a mighty crescendo. The subplots - the Muggle parents, the Snape family, Malfoy Snr and Jnr, the Longbottom arc, Ginny-Remus, even Dumbledore and his family\'s position - all these may seem to be unconnected, but they are tightly woven to create a massive whole. I can\'t wait to see how each thread joins to complete the picture.
Oh, there are so many points, phrasing and parts that appeal to me as a reader, I don\'t know where to stop gushing! heh. But now that I found your story once more, I\'ll be more dogged at checking the site for its updates.
And boy was I glad I caught up at Consummation and not at Confusion! I don\'t think I could have been a patient reader when I got to the end of Csionsion! lol!
Ma\'am, may I say that you are a compelling storyteller? I love the idea of Longbottom as Severus\' bil! The Longbottom-Snape arc was fraught with irony, humour and that frisson of fear as to how Malfoy, third from Merlin, would retaliate. So many layers of irony and hope - that snatching Helena from under Draco\'s nose in that short hou hours, that Longbottom was indeed Helena\'s hero, that Longbottom would finally find his centre in being that protective husband... and Longbottom\'s nightmare wait! lol at the visuals of Granny!Snape! *giggles*
What an amazing, powerful, symbolic wedding you\'ve painted. The four elements were perfect for each of the teachers, as was the ceremony itself - solemn, without frivolity, with much consideration... Whilstls dls dream of a happy beginning in a giggly wedding that Molly described, I feel that the sacred atmosphere of a thoughtful, awesome reverence is more impactful on the parties involved that a marriage is a serious lifechanging event.
The emotions of your story is the foundation of all that you\'ve built. I love the pacing you took to this story, exploring Hermione and Severus\' rage and helplessness about the situation. The feelings that Hermione had about the wedding night, and her emotions on the night itself - perfect rendering, my Storyteller! I love your compassionate and honourable Severus - his brewing of Maiden\'s Ease was a wonderful touch - not many grooms are as thoughtful as Severus of their brides. They might not be in love, but their unselfishness towards the other party is sometimes more considerate than immature lovers\' considerations for their partners. Oh, and how Severus was rewarded with a 17 year-old lover! Hermione\'s determined study turned to the bedroom is a wonderful reward for Severus\' years of unloved loneliness. I love how even on the marriagebed, you\'ve kept your Severus in perfect form! \'I suppose I could fit it into my schedule\', indeed. *snorts*
Like Severus, I get the growing feeling thhe che couple are in the eye of a storm - and this growing tension is all due your skills at weaving this story into a mighty crescendo. The subplots - the Muggle parents, the Snape family, Malfoy Snr and Jnr, the Longbottom arc, Ginny-Remus, even Dumbledore and his family\'s position - all these may seem to be unconnected, but they are tightly woven to create a massive whole. I can\'t wait to see how each thread joins to complete the picture.
Oh, there are so many points, phrasing and parts that appeal to me as a reader, I don\'t know where to stop gushing! heh. But now that I found your story once more, I\'ll be more dogged at checking the site for its updates.
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just happened to come across this story and I am loving it! Please write more soon!
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was really awsome! I could totally see this happening in the books.
See, a really good fanfic can\'t just be all sex. You have you have a good plot to back it up. The plot in this was well thought out and set the characters in a position that was totally possible. The character\'s reations were just as if J.K. Roweling had written them. I\'m glad to see that one writer here is not completely absorbed with sex (although it is what this site is all about). And you really took the time to write a really thought out story, not completely surrounded by sex.
I look forward to reading your next fanfic.
See, a really good fanfic can\'t just be all sex. You have you have a good plot to back it up. The plot in this was well thought out and set the characters in a position that was totally possible. The character\'s reations were just as if J.K. Roweling had written them. I\'m glad to see that one writer here is not completely absorbed with sex (although it is what this site is all about). And you really took the time to write a really thought out story, not completely surrounded by sex.
I look forward to reading your next fanfic.
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That has to be the best marriage law consumation that I have read since this story idea was proposed.....it was so Hermione that I am still smiling as I am typing this.....I remember my first time with my new husband was spent giggling and laughing our way the the kama sutra