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for A Dish Served Cold

by Barrie

person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best out there. You have true talent, keep writing for us mere mortals.
Much Love,
Eddie
person Eddie The Black Maru....Returns!
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I repeated myself. Well, I guess when its da truth its da truth. It has been forever since you updated!!!! *glares at author* do I havta wait another month??? *puppy eyes* I\'ll be good! promise!!!
thanks for updating, I\'ll check on this one, if you don\'t update I\'ll.....I\'ll.....I\'ll be forced to have words with ya. lol. keep writing! the nine in all their glory bless this author in this and all paths.
Much Love
Eddie
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At last an update! Good, I liked how worried Hermione was and how \"normal\" the Death Eater meeting turned out to be!

Just a little thing though, what kind of primary school must Hermione have gone to to sit on a council?!! OMG, a bunch of ten year olds (and younger?!) deciding stuff in between wetting themselves and having hissy fits because they want to go out and play. Remember that at eleven Hermione was much more mature than others her age. No primary school would have a council with pupils on it, not even Hermione. Sorry, but I don\'t buy it. I would believe she\'d heard her parents talk about neighbourhood watch or Rotary meetings or something though.
person Charlotte
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh pretty please can we have more? I love this fic.

Good on Hermione for trying to change Severus\' shampoo, I think a nice camomile scent would work wonders.
person ql
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! OMG! There going to use the soulmate spell! There going to use the soulmate spell! I LOVE IT!
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems like its been forever sense you\'ve updated this....or is it just me? Keep going! Its one of the best out there!
Much Love
Eddie
person wakhiza
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am SO loving this story, I just can\'t tell you how much. Please write more, threaten the plot bunny if you have to, but write more, SOON!!!
person Ishka
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pls update, I woulld love to read more story.
person Moi
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, thank the Muse that finally got of her can and inspired another chapter!
person Moi
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And in your defense concerning divine angel\'s complaint about the married students\' names, consider what sort of society would force teenage girls to marry someone not of their choosing? The story is faithful to logic, in that women are second-class and subjugated. Retaining the identity of their maiden names is the last thing such an overbearing Pureblood population would want. Whether we like it or not. (Me, I\'m a Mrs. and proud. Of course I had a hideous maiden name, and a fantastic husband, who honors me above all things. But then, I\'m luckier than most.)