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for A Dish Served Cold

by Barrie

person Andartha
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still keep reading this and I\'m still enjoying it. Very much so. Just thought I\'d let you know : )
person Tamy
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good. Write more, or I shall become angry. I\'M A FANGIRL ON THE EDGE!!
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAY! update!!!! Can\'t wait to hear more! Keep going this is a fantastic story. :) xXx
person tamargrl
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As usual, I finish reading your chapters and am filled with the dueling sentiments of awe and jealousy at your writing ability. Manipulation is fantasic when written well and you have a gift for it. You\'ve also got quite the fantastic imagination, but that comes as no surprise, given the other works of yours I\'ve read.

One question, my Hebrew is rusty, but isn\'t \'B\'vakashah\' \'please\'?
person Lily Michelle
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I\'ve read the whole thing today. It\'s very well done. I really like the idea that is coming through. It seems to me that this story is saying that sometimes two people, who otherwise are complete opposites and dislike each other, can get along and be happy, despite all their differences. You\'ve shown this with Hermione and Severus, and Dora and Percy. I really like that idea. Obviously, some people are just incompatible (i.e. other Death Eaters and the murdered Muggleborns), but there is some hope. It\'s very encouraging.

Also, I like your style of writing. It\'s quite good and flows well. AFF always screws up fics in some way (the way it makes those random scrambling of words occasionally), but on the whole it\'s very good. I applaud you.

Is there any way I can get on a mailing list for updates to this story? I\'d really love to know when new chapters are coming out.

~Cheers and Hermione love :D
Lily Michelle
person angel
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter i cant wait in till you update it .... i need to know what harry wants snape to do and how thing will turn out for snape and hermione soooooooooo please i beg of you update sooon i just love how this story is coming along and thank you for all the chapter you have giving us so far i hope to read the nex chapter every every every sooon well bye for now

angel
person a_reader
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply wonderful. I do hope you update again soon.
person lysa1
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A brilliantly written story. I read it almost in one sitting (had to go to work). Interesting OFC
person Catpower
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read this story over the last couple of days. I am enjoying it. SS\'s bedroom was great - I really enjoy your visual descriptions. More sex would be nice (sorry to be basic as I know your story is about more than that but I guess I\'ve read so many sexy stories with the HP characters in that I regard them as being highly oversexed and expect them to do it A LOT!). Glad Crookshanks got the fish. I could picture that scene really clearly and it was hilarious. I would love it if you provided lots of fluffy detail about HG/SS\'s baby and maybe SS getting slightly soppy. Maybe Bunny Wuffles could make another cameo appearance!
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving this!! can\'t wait to see more! Please tell me there will be more!! I\'m so entranced with the story I\'m not quite sure what to say here apat from, wow, fantastic and *hugs*. I was told once that reading a book is entering someone elses world , (its very true of course) and I have to say I\'m loving living in your wold. :) Hope to see another update soon. :) *bows*