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Ahha! I found it here. I am just too impatient. I see the imagery muse is alive and well! Such great, crisp descriptions of emitons and place.

Love teh Dumbdore proposal, with lots of mystery.

i love it i hope the rivening works i would love to see lupn and ginny have a happy ever after and he can go to her games and i hope all works out well for the rest of the gang i cant wait in till you update next i just love this story ........... so in till next time later and i hope you update soon and than you

angel

I followed the your story from the first chapter and now I finally decided to review (sorry for taking so long).
First of all: great fic. I\'m totally into marriage- fiction but your story is one of the vip stuff.
So there are two things to coment on. First: the Bloody Baron thing- a real cliffy. Never read that before, like involing the Baron. I wonder what the background it is. Second: What\'s the thing about D

Now there were some really interesting twists to this chapter. Looking forward to the next part.

I like your story. I was wondering about snape\'s dads name. Does it have a meaning or something? i separated it into sections. ta-lie-sin which could be thought into to lie or sin anyways good stry.

In response to the fact that they lowered the marrying age to 16 and ginny ust turned 16 she doesnt have to worry abut the law because Ginny is pureblood. which is why ron wants to marry that one girl or whatever. he wantas to help her.and please edit your work better.

Riht splendid, this is, and we can\'t wait for you to continue. One thing though - the Latin of your marriage spell is off. I (Jisen of Aoluas Anminti) take Latin, so I thought I might make a suggestion. If I\'m being a pest, just tell me. I had a few ideas: Matrimonium optimum legeo (I choose the best marriage), Matrimonium optimum seligo (I select the best marriage), and Virum optimum seligo [or elegeo, or legeo] (I select (or elect, or choose) the best man). The reason maritus optimus selectus (did I remember that right?) is wrong is because maritus and optimus aren\'t in the right case, and selectus is the perfect principle part of the verb (I think it\'s passive, too, but I\'m not checking my Latin notes as I write). Anyways, the translation as you had it originally would have been \"the best marriage I have been selected,\" which doesn\'t make much sense. If it\'s not the past passive it would have been \"the best marriage I selected,\" which passes in English but is still wrong grammatically in Latin because \"best marriage\" is the subject as you had it, and it should be the direct object -- off on a tangent, sorry.
Anyways, I really do love the story and I think everyone is portrayed beautifully. You can consider my Latin suggestions or you can let me know exactly where I can shove them. Please tell me if I\'m being a pest.
By the way, we (all of Aoluas again) would welcome becoming your (temporary?) beta while your other one is away. Think of us as your beta-beta while your alpha-beta is away, ne? Keep writing - this site needs all of the skillful stories it can get. We\'re a bit tired of immature prepubescents writing lemons with descriptions straight out of bad romance novels and characters altered beyond recognition to suit an impossible, illogical plot. That is to say, so far as we\'re concerned, you rock, and not merely by comparison, either. Ahh, we\'ve yabbered enough. Ciao. Write on.

I really enjoyed your story. Good pace and variety. My only problem is that there seems to be a chapter missing -- Chapter 13: Snape/Granger Reception. Things happened there that were referenced further on in the story but I never read it. Look forward to more ... Thanks

well, the end of that chapter left me completely flummoxed. i was so involved in following the other pairings that i didn\'t notice the signs of this one coming. i am enjoying the story very much. i am still not sure what is going on the malfoy sr and the seer plot are connected yet but will defnitely keep reading. will keep reading the chapters as they are posted but am looking forward to the betaed versions too as the typos are a bit distracting. eagerly awaiting the next chapter. pretty addictive story.

omg that was great i cant wait in till you update next i jut love this story soooooooooooooooooooo please update sooon i just have to know what will happen next and how snape will act when he finds out that he could be a seer and that Sabine Snape and Albus Dumbledore had put a restraints on his \'gift\'...... please update soon well in till next time later

angel