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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still reading this story - and enjoying it. It\'s turned into quite an epic IMO. I do admire the way you convey characters - Dumbledore is much more interesting than usual (his marriage is a great idea - better than the Minerva cliche any day) and your Hermione more likeable. The Yidoni are an interesting lot. I was v glad that Sev\'s seer abilities showed various probabilities, rather than one fixed destiny; I liked the way you expressed this and would enjoy reading more about Sev\'s experience of \'seeing\' - and if it affects his relationship with HG. Enjoying the Ginny/Remus thing too.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GReat chapter! I love it! Hell, I love this story so far and can\'t wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
Tiffany
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor gin i hope all goes well for her and lupin and what in the drak lord up to now hmmmm and what is dumbledore up to ..... please up date soon ~on her knees ~please i beg of you update sooon i just love this story and i cant wait in till the next chapter ... in till then keep up the great work and later for now
angel
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very entertaining chapter. The secret room, the new Dumbledore bride... it boggles the imagination! Well done, now get back to that keyboard!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter of course.. funny too. :)
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter im glad they got lupin to got with the plan .... and georgian and margaret may be getting along now i hope it work out for them and i wonder how snape is going to act around his half-brother and i hope he does meets him when mione around maybe the meeting will go better then when helena when looking for him to meet him..... well in till next time later
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have become convinced that you don\'t come out with new chapters nearly often enough. However, they are usually of such high quality, I cannot quibble over the time it takes to produce them. The scene in the Slytherin Bordello was simply spiffing! And I am liking Trajan very much. Sursum ad summum!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo! this is getting good....
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I don\'t really know weither you are still eager on getting reviews for your fanfics, since you obviously are loved and prized by so many.
Anyway I wanted to let you know that I just finished reading both \"A Dish Served Cold\" and \"An Easy Job\", and liked them very much.
You seem to have a real talent for writing, as I\'m still trying to figger out how you can keep up with all the diffrent storylines in ADSC, I surely had a hard time doing so from time to time. ;-)
That\'s also one of the only 2 comments (in less \"SUPER\" way) I could possibly come up with on the story as well. As more then one storyline keeps the story from being monotonous, the lot of them in ADSC gives the story during some chapters a quite unpersonal feel. As if it\'s just piling up events from the whole variety of charaters rather then creating emotional bounding and therefor reactions with them. So you might want to consider creating some more involvement with the characters.
The second comment on the other hand is a very personal one. Being quite the admirer of SS/HG parings, and any SS/Female Char. parings at all actually cause I surely think his personality is worth exploring farther then JKR does (especially in the latest book); I always thought of them as having a more fiery relationship (somehow like the ending of AEJ). So guess I miss the imagined fierce reactions, surely with the whole hormonal pregnancy thingy, the fights, the stolen kisses and the passionate \"making up\" sex a little. *blush* ;-)
Dispite the comments I\'d love to read more of ADSC, so please keep up the writing when you find time to do so!
Greets and thumbs up,
Fleurke
I don\'t really know weither you are still eager on getting reviews for your fanfics, since you obviously are loved and prized by so many.
Anyway I wanted to let you know that I just finished reading both \"A Dish Served Cold\" and \"An Easy Job\", and liked them very much.
You seem to have a real talent for writing, as I\'m still trying to figger out how you can keep up with all the diffrent storylines in ADSC, I surely had a hard time doing so from time to time. ;-)
That\'s also one of the only 2 comments (in less \"SUPER\" way) I could possibly come up with on the story as well. As more then one storyline keeps the story from being monotonous, the lot of them in ADSC gives the story during some chapters a quite unpersonal feel. As if it\'s just piling up events from the whole variety of charaters rather then creating emotional bounding and therefor reactions with them. So you might want to consider creating some more involvement with the characters.
The second comment on the other hand is a very personal one. Being quite the admirer of SS/HG parings, and any SS/Female Char. parings at all actually cause I surely think his personality is worth exploring farther then JKR does (especially in the latest book); I always thought of them as having a more fiery relationship (somehow like the ending of AEJ). So guess I miss the imagined fierce reactions, surely with the whole hormonal pregnancy thingy, the fights, the stolen kisses and the passionate \"making up\" sex a little. *blush* ;-)
Dispite the comments I\'d love to read more of ADSC, so please keep up the writing when you find time to do so!
Greets and thumbs up,
Fleurke
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I am glad you\'ve taken up the story again, I was beginning to think you\'d abandoned it. Sarit is one of my favorite names, I was sad to see you\'d used it for the harridan grandmother. Snape with family is very interesting. All the pairings can be a little much to keep track of over time, but one can always go back and re-read.