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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is that the Snape/Draco in Chapter 5 is hot, hot, *hot*.
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
goodness i can\'t believe that i didn\'t find this story sooner! i was up reading this at 6 am and i couldn\'t stop reading.... your word choice is marvelous plus tasteful and i have to tell you that i was brought to tears at various points in the story. that\'s a true sign of a good author... i just can\'t believe how amazing this is... and i don\'t even particularly care for angst. but this one was the exception. the characterizations were wonderful. i love ron for his change of heart and hermione\'s geniune care for draco\'s wellbeing. and draco.... god he\'s so heart-wrenching but i love it. i\'m curious to see why harry hates draco so much; will it be explained further? and the sex scene was hot!
please update this soon as i\'ve seen that this fic has been dormant since april! and let me know too!
please update this soon as i\'ve seen that this fic has been dormant since april! and let me know too!
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm... well it looks like i HAD read the previous chapters... it seemed so familiar. and now i know why! but still this is amazing and i\'m sorry i missed chapter 5. gah still.... UPDATE!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. Please do write more soon.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This a wonderful story! You had me crying and Draco physcological and mental state after the abuse is very convincing. I could almost feel his pain as if it was my own. Let the healing begin. I can\'t wait to see what will happen doing xmas break will he stay at Hogwart or will his father force him o hoo home. Please update soon!
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good, I\'m intrigued, please write more.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HELLO (Hello..hello..) ECHO (Echo...echo..) :-)
Not many reviews in here yet, which is really sad for such an amazing story. You might submit this one to Restricted Section as well. I know the readers theouldould LOVE this!
This story islly lly one of the best I\'m following right now and I\'m going nuts trying to figure out why it doesn\'t have more hits and more reviews. I don\'t always review every chapter I read, but I\'m making it a point to on this one because 1) I think it\'s that good, and 2) I\'d like to help people find this gem of a story.
The only thing I\'ve been able to come up with is that perhaps you might think about editing your story description a bit and making it more compelling. With that writing skill of yours, I\'m sure you can punch it up a bit!
I\'m more of a Harry/Hermione reader that enjoys a good Hermione/Draco story when I want to read a girl girl falls the the bad boy story. I also like Harry/Draco when they are well done, but all the M/M/M stuff with no explanation had me worried, but one night I was up late bored and since there was only one chapter, I decided to give it a shot anyway and that was enough to get me hooked!
Not many reviews in here yet, which is really sad for such an amazing story. You might submit this one to Restricted Section as well. I know the readers theouldould LOVE this!
This story islly lly one of the best I\'m following right now and I\'m going nuts trying to figure out why it doesn\'t have more hits and more reviews. I don\'t always review every chapter I read, but I\'m making it a point to on this one because 1) I think it\'s that good, and 2) I\'d like to help people find this gem of a story.
The only thing I\'ve been able to come up with is that perhaps you might think about editing your story description a bit and making it more compelling. With that writing skill of yours, I\'m sure you can punch it up a bit!
I\'m more of a Harry/Hermione reader that enjoys a good Hermione/Draco story when I want to read a girl girl falls the the bad boy story. I also like Harry/Draco when they are well done, but all the M/M/M stuff with no explanation had me worried, but one night I was up late bored and since there was only one chapter, I decided to give it a shot anyway and that was enough to get me hooked!
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh dear god... i am very impressed with this story! my heart was tugged and so saddened by how draco has been suffering. this story brought a lot of emotion out of me... it\'s so dard hed heart-wrenching. i do hope you post the next chapter up soon.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah! i don\'t understand why this story doesn\'t have like 50 reviews by now! this story is delightfully dark and this chapter was great too. harry being portrayed as a total ass is pretty rare i think and i wanted to smack the kid when he said all that mean stuff to draco. and draco... he\'s such a puddle of despair and sadness... but there\'s hope! and yay! a ron, ginny, and hermione that i actually like! :-D please update soon! please!!!?!?
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This continues to be such gripping work. In points, it\'s so detailed, it\'s horrifying to read, but that\'s what ratings are for. You\'ve kept this so real. The end of this chapter was really good. I like how you have the adults not perfect and Snape defending his actions at first, but then looking back and realizing that he could have done things differently.