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for Fire & Ice: War Games

by Anubis

person mother
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still with it. Will there be any further updates. Pleeeease.
person mother
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It just gets better and better. Do you post anywhere else because this site has been a real pain recently.
person Maiden
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great war scene.. And it\'s cathing how you hint us that this War will have something to do with the future... very J.K Rowling like. And a very good use of Vocabulary, can\'t wait to read on!
person Maiden
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i\'m on chapter 2 and im a bit confused. I suggest you say who is speaking after a quote... it would be a lot easier to understand that way. Thanks
person mother
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another superb chapter. I won\'t ask which two, I like playing mastermind. I think I see now that they could be in the same year.
person mother
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THis is almost as devious as JKR herself but I am enjoying it immensly. I love a story where the end isn\'t predictable.
person mother
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s just getting better and better. I\'m starting to work out who is who now and can\'t wait for the next installment.
person Jess.
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Anubis.
I was only joking when I meantioned Sirius being called a prick.
Naturally at that age and at Hogwarts with his friends he was undoubtedly a little prick from time to time, but I have a soft spot for my little convict, and werewolf and stag, stuff the rat!!........Luv Jess.
person Jess.
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another two excellent chapters, one objection! Sirius is no Prick (Thank you) .
As for who is shadow? No still no idea, but then again if I were at Hogwarts I would most likely be placed in Hufflepuff. ..Jess.
person Jess.
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting Fic , interesting to see life from snapes prospective. your writing is excellent and I love the Little Quotes before each chapter, as to where to go with this, That\'s hard to she bhe best way would be going with how you feel and letting it flow from there........ Luv Jess