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February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is there a huge chunk of this story missing or is it supposed to go from nothing to the ending without telling the reader how they got there? I'm completely confused.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Missing part of the middle of the story.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
there seems to be a part missing...
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...it kinda jumps from the conversation to the smut. Looks like some kind of error?
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all.. the text seems to have gotten a buggy at the middle, tho.
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This isnot a complete story. A large chunk in the middle is missing. Can you either provide me with the \'complete\' story or let me know where I can find it?
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There seems to be a large chunk missing in the middle of this story. a paragraph begins with Hermione or Tonks saying something to Harry, then in mid-sentence, switches to Harry feeling Tonks\' tits while Hermione gives him a blow job. What caused this discrepancy? Please fix it.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just wanted to say this was a great little fic. I do believe it was one of my drawings of H/Hr/T that may have set Nappa off. Here have a look: http://www.boomspeed.com/muddgutts/alonetogether_HHRT.jpg
Of course mine is a bit different, but thats ok. thats for a good read.
Muddgutts
Of course mine is a bit different, but thats ok. thats for a good read.
Muddgutts
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, Harry needs to loosen up! The best part, I thought, wasn\'t even in the story proper: it was the image of Tonks as Haruka, I loved it! Good imaging skills. Next time, though, I think a little more enthusiasm for kink on the male part is needed.