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for In the Eye of the Beholder

by HGM

person erin kite
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fuckshitdamn! that was hott! ok, as i regain control of my brain...this was wonderfully sexy. i so did not see the draco thing coming, so when it did i was like whoa! so ya, very good story overall. i enjoyed it very much.
person deeta
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I usually adore your stories. But this one seems to be going too fast. It isn\'t realistic that Hermione suddenly doesn\'t mind Draco fucking her instead of Ron.
person Mercika
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! Very Sexy and well written.
person D/Hr ROCKS
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, wasn\'t that nice, kiddies?

WRITE MORE!
person Selina
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, at first I was kind of grossed out because it was Ron. I mean... ewww. But I figured it was Polyjuice Potion or something, but still, It was Ron. I liked it towards the ending though!
person cherii_emrei
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey HGM! I made my way here from the dracohermionecommunity.

Hot diggity damn!!!! Wahoooooo!! This is hotttttt!!

I would like to see more backstory though.. What caused her to change her mind so quickly? And no, the greatness of sex can\'t be the deciding factor. It\'ll be a big factor, but not the only one to sway her mind.

And the implications of rape is leaving a bad taste in my mouth. Maybe there should be more into Hermione enjjoying instead of her saying \"no Stop it.\"

but hey, she enjoyed it and it was hott!

write more, Elwyn!!
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good you have to write more soon.
I wonna know if Hermione really leaves Ron and goes for Draco. Up-date soon
person Jillian
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What a surprising end! I really really liked this story. The sex was hot and sweaty and yummmmy! I think you should give us a sequel of some more of the devious duos sexual adventures! lol

Thank much for the good read,
Jillian
person Mandy
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was awesome. I have mostly good comments. I loved how it was Draco. It was so convincingly Ron until she screamed Draco! Keep up the great work! I LOVE DM/HG fics!
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sitting here with soaking knickers, sweating, and shaking in my slippers. May have some, please.