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by Emery

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1 & 2... This is so very sad, wwritwritten, but sad!!! Will you be adding any more? Deb >^..^<
person Hannah
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeep! *falls over* That was great! *muffled sound from the floor* >>wrifff mooore<<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really got a lot across for being only 3 chapters!!! I think it works better the way you re-did the chapter order!!! Deb >^..^<
person Hannah
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You! Write more.
person Susan
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please say this is not over!!?? Wonderful story. Sad and a bit too short...only because I wanted more. So bittersweet. I would love to know how Severus found Hermion And And did he actually look in his pensieve? sorry, am rambling. Thank you for a great story.
person jeannette
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so sad,when i read hannah,i was confused ,then i kept reading,please write more.