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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this so far--i can\'t believe how you\'ve covered everything so far...
i hope that you continue to write like this
i hope that you continue to write like this
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well written, shows promice. I love these stories and hope you will continue!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start, please keep going!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like how you have started this!!! I have been reading quite a few of the Marriage Law stories & am happy to see that you have incorporated a few different twists!!! I will be watching for chapter 2!!! Deb >^..^<
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thwo things I already like about this fic.... That we are reminded first and foremost that Hermione is not perfect. And seco, th, that Harry gets pissed off enough to go out and waste Voldemort on his own. Go Harry! Looking forward to more.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Way cool! I like that someone finally had Hermione -- even with Harry\'s question -- figure out the timeturner angle before she actually gets petitioned. : ) I look forward to seeing where this story leads from this excellent beginning.
Kiri
Kiri
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! Poor Hermione. I am curious as to how Harry\'s past will play into this, if at all. What did the Malfoys do while they had him. What plan will Hermione come up with? Great job! I can\'t wait to read more!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start! These are intelligent young people and I think it is about time somebody let them figure out the potential problems for themselves rather than the the poor girl sitting in DUmbledore\'s office and generally doing a pretty good impression of a gibbering idiot. That is not the Hermione we all know and love. Keep it up.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is off to a very good start. I am definitely going to keep checking back for updates to this one. I didn\'t see any grammar, spelling, or puncuation mistakes so you\'re good to go on that end. Please keep writing this story!
Ciao ^_^
Ciao ^_^
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. Poor Hermione. Poor Harry. Cannot wait to read more.
J :)
J :)