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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful, dear, par usual. hurry up and write!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its really great! PLEASE UPDATE, YOU\'RE KILLIN ME!
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, don\'t stop there -- this is a good start. (Anyway, we\'re all suckers for the marriage challenge; we\'d keep reading even if it wasn\'t a very good start.)
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good job. please keep me informed of updates ! :)
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It seems I\'m really hooked to these Marriage Law Challenges. I found your first two chapters very well written. I feel badly for Hermione, as I know the inevitable is about to come. *evil grin* I look forward to your next chapter... update soon!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think you have a wonderful begging to your story and i urge you to keep on writing
snapes daughter
snapes daughter
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! This story is moving along very nicely--I\'m hooked! ^_^ This is a really good story, hon. Keep it up!
Ciao!
Ciao!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2... I was expecting Severus to blow a gasket, but since he didn\'t it leaves me wondering if there isn\'t something going on in his mind about this?!? WHY can\'t Hermione tell Minerva about t I I can\'t wait to find out!!! Til chapter 3, Deb >^..^<
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent set up for this situation. It\'s slightly different than other \'marriage law\' stories, and you\'ve created a modicum of understanding between Snape and Hermione. Nicely done.
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve got a great start to a well-worn plot! Keep up the good work!