rate_review Reviews

Ooh... I\'m just scared to see what Draco does with the house elves... Update soon!

Fantastic Plot. I must say this is thrst rst time I\'ve encountered one of such insinuations.
Not to mention the fantastic possibilities that your story holds. So, I\'m very anxious to read your next chapter and if I were over where you are, I\'d more than likely force you to continue it. Though all writers know that it simply doesn\'t happen that way.

Boo hoo.


But, one thing that struck me as a strange insertation (pardon my diction) was when you quoted the American Declaration of Independance (is that right?). I\'m going out on a limb here, but I sincerely doubt that it\'s a world-wide \"muggle\" thing. Though it would be the idealized world.

Anyways. The first chapter\'s lovely. I\'d like to see you continue.

This is a good start and an interesting idea. My only question is will Draco know its Hermione? Woudn\'t it be better for him to think she was just a normal house elf it the intent of the story is to show Hermione that Draco isn\'t as bad as she thinks he is?

What a great idea! I don\'t think people focus enough on Hermione\'s passion for House Elves rights. But Malfoy, that is just bizarre. Why would Dumbledore enlist Draco of all people to help with Hermione\'s research? Interesting choice on his part (Dumbledore\'s).
I am really looking forward to where you are going with this.
Write more soon.

Oh man... hehehehe I love how this starts! She has not an inkling of what she got herself into. Good story btw ^.^

this is very creative - can\'t wait for the next chapter