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for Elves Without Clothes

by NoThyme

person J-9
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is hilaius!!!!! hahahaha I laughed out loud, (and also got myself in a plie of crap by doing so) keep going!
person slashgoddess
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! I was rolling around!!! That was so funny! *wipes tears from eyes* WOOT! THAT was bloody brilliant... can\'t wait to see what Ony thinks when she hears it! *Giggles* probably a good thing that she can\'t spill the beans after she becomumanuman again! Please continue... and quickly!
person Bambu
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a delightful romp this is turning into. Draco and Hermoine seem to be learning a lot more about each other...
person Candi
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story. Can\'t wait for Hermione\'s reaction once she learns what the spell means. Update Soon!
person Kel
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, this is a very interesting way to \"solve\" Hermione\'s moral delimma. Alsn chn chapter 2, is \"fluffer\" ntenntentional reference to a porno flick, or just a little foreshadowing? ;) Great job, can\'t wait for more!
person slashgoddess
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this concept... it\'s one I haven\'t run across before... se contiontinue... it\'s good
person Katherine
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Spanking? I admit, the thought of it is fetching, but in the next chapter? I think that\'d translate into house-elves\' masters spanking them instead after the initial excitement. (shudders)

A nice, slow chapter with Hermione, though still a bit stubborn (a miniscule amount of stubborn), is being very house-elf. ish If I use use such a string of words.
person Creepy Susie
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really liking the story
UPDATE SOON OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!!!
~ Creepy susie
person Kippen
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great idea. I really enjoyed reading what you have so far. My favorite lines had to be Hermione thinking what am I, your personal fluffer? And Draco saying
person Estrilda
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh darn - I was really hoping for Severus.