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for Elves Without Clothes

by NoThyme

person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ksevfansd
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I can\'t wait to read more. The conversation between Her...I mean Ony and Snape was hilarious!
person Whomping Willow
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the heads up on the glitch with chapter 6 . . . should be all better now.
:o)
person Narcissa Black
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this to be very original and entertaining, but I was a little disturbed that the last chapter seemed to imply that Draco was not as interested in Hermione\'s pleasure as his own. I know, he is a guy, that is the standard. But in a relationship, that usually changes, if it\'s healthy at all. I still enjoyed it, but I would have liked to have known what the spell that Dumbledore cast did.
person Moi
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There seems to be some missing material between chapters 6 and 7.
person ony
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was a good story but the smut was crap. Where are all the details and the Juicy naughty-ness?
person BobotuberPus
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this fic and am so happy it ended DM/HG not HG/SS. That whole thing with Snape was a little too creepy for me.

Anyway, I found your sharp wit and your innuendos very refreshing. It definitely added to the quality of this story. I knew I could expect great things from this story when I read about F.U.C.K.M.E. (Freedom and Unity for Creatures and all Kinds of Magical Entities) in the first chapter. Lol! I especially liked your witty titles and author names for the wizard sex self help books.

Draco
person Padfoot the Marauder
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! That was different! Since I am the mushy-hugsy-cudly-loving type I
person Padfoot the Marauder
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! That was a great ending to a great story! I\'ve been following this since the beginning and I was wondering how it was going to be ending. It was great. Thumbs up!

Padfoot the Marauder.
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great ending!