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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!! that was flippin HOT, SEXY, AND OH SO WICKED!!!! fantasic job!!!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MM, yes it was a happy birthday wasn't it?
More birthdays!!
More birthdays!!
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It would have been even better if it was harry that Hermoine was doing.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, what a little mindless sex amongst friends?! Lol. I\'d no that wouldn\'t happen in a million yeras, but a good read anyway.
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Trio fun is can be a favorite, but you have all three of them very inexperienced to the point of being innocent, very drunk, but with enough wits about them to be able to perform sexually and to somehow magically know exactly what to do their first times (but a terrible lack of preperation for anal sex!), but not enough wits about them for even a second of, \"should we be doing this or not?\"
I\'d highly suggest reworking this one and really giving some thought about what would really happen in a situation like this. If the guys can still physically function like that and they haven\'t done that kind of thing before, they are sober enough to have some reservations or at least show more surprise. There also is a lack of detail in the sex. That could spice it up quite a bit as well.
I\'d highly suggest reworking this one and really giving some thought about what would really happen in a situation like this. If the guys can still physically function like that and they haven\'t done that kind of thing before, they are sober enough to have some reservations or at least show more surprise. There also is a lack of detail in the sex. That could spice it up quite a bit as well.