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for Mind Numbing Potion

by Nagini

schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: Mindnumbing potion.

Hi, i am just writing to let you know that your story has a few chapters missing and it is kind of hard to read with out them. Also you might want to go through your chapter and edit the grammatical and spelling mistakes to make the story flow a bit better, however, you do have a fantastic plot line and it could go very far.
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiya, is it just me or is chapter 2 missing? interesting story line, liked the Harry/Draco/Ginny thing...
person Laerai
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Its quick, funny, and has a promising plot. With added lemony goodness of course! Good job!
person The Oracle
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is quite interesting! Please post more chappies!
person Cassandra
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What about the Professor and Mione? You know Ilike all this Draco/Harry and Harry/Ginny stuff. But I
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Harry/Ginny fluff disguised as slash. Interesting.
person Cassie
schedule February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Nice fic. Really ...hmm...satisfying.
person Sandy
schedule February 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When ARE you going to write more of this? You want more of what I've been doing!!!