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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow - great chapter, April! Very interesting plot twist, with Hermione trying to protect Snape against his new enemies... and now her new enemies, too? Hmm. Update soon! Can\'t wait to see wher eit goes from here... will she escape with him, maybe?
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl, this is GOOD STUFF. It\'s not fly, ly, frothy or flippant. SO damn what? It\'s also bloody marvellous, and well-written. I\'m sticking with it. Blessings! Kaitkaitkait x
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
April.....what can I say? You have made our lovely professor a character that polarizes both ends of the emotional spectrum for good and evil. As for Hermione, you have managed to keep her character steady, stable, and true to herself while dealing with very difficult issues. However you end up finishing this story, it is going to be a gripping (if not entertaining) read that will keep me coming back for more at every possible chance.....Linda
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chappy....loved it, please keep it going.
D.A.
D.A.
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, April, I\'m still with ya\' baby! Reading every chapter and hanging on every word! Keep \'em coming!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was intense!! I felt for Snape and his confusion, and was amazed at Hermione\'s calm under pressure. This is so well written and I can\'t wait for more!!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For someone who claims to not play around in angsty territory, yortairtaiseemseemhavehave a good handle on it. I loved this chapter. I loved it because the lemony scene had more grit and reality to it than many other pieces.
You didn\'t lose sight of the fact that Snape had been immobile for an extended period of time. You didn\'t lose sight of Snape\'s and Hermione\'s characters.
You have done an EXCELLENT job with this. Even though it\'s a hard read, I look forward to reading more.
Still Ill, TheGreyLady
You didn\'t lose sight of the fact that Snape had been immobile for an extended period of time. You didn\'t lose sight of Snape\'s and Hermione\'s characters.
You have done an EXCELLENT job with this. Even though it\'s a hard read, I look forward to reading more.
Still Ill, TheGreyLady
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As usual, a splendid and beautifully-written chapter. I particularly like the way you combine your deeply emotive narrative with touches of humour. Very impressed. Thank you, Kait x
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another excellient chapt and cliffie......looking forward to nextnext one....does the evil bunny need more carrot juice?
D.A.
D.A.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... evil cliffhanger... so sad about Falco, but interesting possessive!Snape in this fic. I liked Hermione\'s glamour idea, and her need for contact... can\'t wait for the update!