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for an awfully big adventure...

by h0lden

person Lady Sirius
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was great! This was fantastic! My kudos to you on a wonderful story! I nearly fell off my chair, I laughed so hard! And poor Sirius came off looking like such a boob, I felt sorry for him! Of course, I was rooting for Hermione and Snape the whole time.

I recently finished my first fanfic, A Tale of Two Men, which is a Sirius/Severus story, and am working on a new one -The Return of Sirius Black - which can best be described as HP meets Wizard of Oz meets Alice in Wonderland. I would love your thoughts on these - please enjoy!

Thanks once again for a marvelous tale, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Lady Sirius
person Lady Sirius
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to ask you something - Is the name of your story perchance taken from an Alan Rickman film of the same name? Just wondering!

schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is this the end?
Please say no, please please please.
For the past week I have been like living with this story and all of a sudden something that resembles an end looms up.
Will there be more chapters?? Update sooooon

Cheers!!
Sohara
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific! Thank you, holden! Kait x
person spaz141
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pretty intense and brutal first time scene. Interesting story, thanks.
person spaz141
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* *sniff* poor silly Hemione. I hope Sirius didn\'t destroy the potion, he needs it. thanks.
person LovesThePotionBOy
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THUMP!

That was me, falling off the edge of my seat. YOU CAN\'T STOP THERE, HOLDEN!!!! PLeeeeeeeeaaaaaasee update soon. Sorry about the lame review. Kait x
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BLimey. Ooh. Is Hermione really going to just follow Sev into an hotel room at his say-so? Or are we going to have another \"you bastard\" scene? Gripping yarn, holden. please don\'t stop! Kait x
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT holden, is how you end a chapter. BAM!!! Great closing linI amI am most impressed.
Post more tomorrow please.
Cheers!
person crudedly
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES! YES! Finally! I thought they\'d never going to make it!