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It was an interesting jaunt.

Thank you for sharing, and happy writing!

Ohh, that was a lot of misunderstandings... And I LOVE misunderstandings! I think this is the first story I've EVER read (and honey, I've read them all) that had enough misunderstandigs to sate my hunger. There were a few minor spelling-errors, but I expect that is due to aff.net uploading-something-or-whatever, I don't know, but I've seen the errors before, so ... ya know...
Great story, I was really afraid that this would be a 'rewrite' of An Awfully Big Adventure (one of my favorite movies!), but as a HG/SS-shipper, the thought of Severus as Hermiones father is... nauseating to say the least. I was pleasantly surprised, and by chapter 5 or so, I forgot to dread Severus turning into P.L. O'Hara...

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

My my ... she does get herself into fixes. That is what happens when you try to use magic to solve all your problems. Love shouldn't be forced. Guess she found that out. Enjoyed the fic.

how cuuuuuute. \"his...err...\"excitement\"
i actually laughed out loud reading ch/ 17...the assume part was definitely corny coming out of snapes mouth heheh.
its good stuff....kinda prolonged in the beginning though....i guess it builds up excitement
wish hermy was more uhhh forceful, not so confused all the time. shes a powerful chick.

hahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
sirius making out w/ snape
LOL.......

dam that was good =) severus n hermione r the dreamiest couple ^_^ ur a genius, did u noe that?

I stumbled upon your story yesterday, and have been reading since. At first, it was hard to get into considering it was a Snape/Hermione fic taking place while technically she was still a student, not to say that I dislike the pairing, just prefer the ones where she is older. That aside, it got to the point where I just couldn't stop reading. I'll be starting on another this afternoon (a good way to procrastinate, especially when the muse doesn't want to cooperate). You can see how far you have come as a writer, and have given the characters your own subtle twist on who they are, in a way that the reader can still relate to JK's vision.

I hardly ever give any reviews on the fan fiction I have read, yet I had to on yours, because I truly do want to know where you are taking them all. I need to know what happens next, and for me, that is always the hall mark of a good author. If I can find a way to save favorite authors on this site, would you mind if I added you?

Do you write any other sort of fiction besides fan fiction? I, personally am new to the whole genera, normally sticking with literotica.com to publish my original fiction. But I digress, do you write anything other than fan fiction? It would be interesting to see you create a wholly unique universe of your own.

Celis

This was a really good story. I throughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you
Katie

Holden,

You have done it again! I read this one on LordandLadysnape.n LOV LOVE YOU!!! I cant tell you how much I enjoyed that story. I read the entire thing in one sitting. I couldn\'t stop. It is now 4:30am and I just had to review before I went to sleep. That was FANTASTIC!!!! It was like a roller coaster ride.Poor Ron and Poor Sirius. LMAO just the thought of that love potion making him fall in lust for Severus had me cracking up. I love all of your stories. I cant wait to read the next one.

* KUDOS * This is another Holden Masterpiece.

~ Jaimie ~