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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning, I think that I'll be watching for an update on this one. I'd really like to see how this plays out. Good work, I really hope that you continue this.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't say that you stopped writing! I really like this story! Please submit more chapters!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the start to this! Keep it up!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you have the base for a good story here!!! This 1st chapter gave some good information while allowing room to question other aspects!!! I look forward to seeing what happens in future chapters!!! Til chapter 2, Deb >^..^<
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LoL, Raven, I can definitely see your satirical side in this one! So? What\'s going to happen next? I know you have another chapter, lets have it!!!