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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person Anon
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.k., I haven't reviewed ANYTHING in ever so long but I am only so resistant to guilt when an author I like applies it.

If it hadn't been for your Author's Note that gives some reassurranI'd I'd be ready to walk away from this, sure that it's going to end in angst, bitterness and hateful misunderstandings.

I will hold you to your word about the "light at the end of the tunnel" ~ and I will find you and flame your delicate patootie (aka "arse") if you don't bring this to a reasonably happy conclusion. *glares*
person Bambu
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What? You don't have 1.34 million reviews for this piece of work! Absolutely shocking! This is fabulously iconoclastic -- you mix genres with irreverance and a free hand, blending and merging current muggle and archaic wizarding worlds in hilarity, and yet, there is heart and real emotion that you bandy about in a delightful and poignant manner. This has been a terrific journey from start until now. I'm glad you had Hermoine tell him off... he needed it. She, is falling apart and someone else needs to help... it's easy enough for the 'adults' to plan her life but then to leave her with the aftermath and only the help of her teenaged friends is cruel in its own right, because truly she is no longer merely a teenager... she has become an adult through the crucible of the past several months. Are you going to telescope the next several months to the end of the year, or what? See, I find myself eager for an update already... greedy even.
person melissa ivory
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
did you know fiona apple wrote a song called 'love ridden'? great story, please hurry with the next chapter, on the edge of my seat!
person GrrArrg
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved Harry's lying about sex to make Hermione feel better!!

Such a sad ending though...I want some happy and I want it now!!

Kisses
Grr
person Bambu
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, chapter 24 is heartbreaking. Severus needs a good swift kick in the arse! I can't wait to see who administers it to him.
person June
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 24 - AAAUGH!!!!! You finally update the story, and SS-HG are STILL not happily together??? Go back and write another chapter!!! Mean author...
person elementaldeity
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I get the whole depressed Hermione bit, but did you have to cut it off like that? The wait will be excruciating, you know. Will Hermione revert to depression now tshe she had a sort of run in with Severus? Bizzaro World was a nice touch by the way.

elementaldeity
person Sabrina
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I feel bad now. Please update soon.
person jaYne
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WTF! that was an evil to to end a chapter!!! WRITE MORE OR I WILL KILLLLLL U. lol
person GrrArrg
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sob*

You so cruel!!

And you rock, I love horongrong she was!!

and I'd like some more please??

Kisses
Grr