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I loved this story, it was so funny and so sad, and it had everything that a good fan fic needs. Except you do need to have a real smut scene, you know where Hermione actually likes it and all that. *sigh* so sad. Yay to you for writing awesome fan fic.

(yes i know my email is pathetic) OMG OMG OMG!! FINISH IT!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!! CANT WAIT!! MUST READ!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! update soon this story is WICKED AWESOME!! keep it up!!!! cheers! *hugs*

*~Leila~*

That was great! Just as good, no better, than all the others chaps! I can't wait for the next chapter! I know you just put these up but HURRY PLEASE! This is the best hg/ss story EVER! OF ALL TIME! And I LOVED the Buffy/Michelle Branch song.

~QueneArual

Ok, having finally decided to read this story (because before I thought it was a HP/Buffy crossover and I have no patience for crossovers) I have to review. First the bad news:
1) The last chapter was trite shit. Not at all what I had come to expect from the rest of the story and very disappointing.
2) Your wheedling for reviews in earlier chapters was annoying, don't do that.

The good news:
This was, overall, a funny and touching story and I hope that chapter 27 will regain that tone. The Buffy refs were hilarious (especially the butt-monkey one, from one of my fav episodes). I especially liked how you protrayed Severus's addiction to computer games and Britney Spears (with the sound off) and how you did the scene with Hermione, Draco, Lanvender and Pansy. The "Saved by the Bell" rambling was worthy of a 'mwah ha ha ha ha'!
Please keep up the good work and don't be put off by my criticism; it's meant to be creative criticism, not flamey.

That was a sweet chapter. Who would have thought? Snape asking Potter for help. Anyways, what was with all the Backstreet Boys lyrics? Just kidding, it was cute, without coming off cliche.

elementaldeity

dadadamn u keep suprising me lol keep up da good work u is definetly a talented writer :-)

I absolutley love the immature vocabulary you use. "Sad Snape gave Harry the heebies", "Damn, theres always a catch", "And your eyes are black, dumbfuck." You have such a way of making a suspenseful chapter entertaining. :) One second I'm feeling all anxious, then I read the next line and giggle (and I don't giggle often, I'll have you know). I love it and can't wait the next one!! (although I understand perfectly about the free food ;)

ArienAstera

Ok now you must muist must write the rest of this because my mom burst into my room thinking somebody was tryo kio killme whenm i started screaming at the top of my lungs " YOU CAN"T DO THIS TO ME NOOOOOOOOO THERS GOT TO BE MORE CHPATERS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO there must be more than this*breaks donwn into small sobs*" ...... *sniff* .......... *:sniff* ....... more pwease be more........... wwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i want more chappys
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no more chappys waaaaaaaaaaaaa ....... ur faithful violent reader

i love this story! you are hilarious i am a big fan of the saved by the bell references! do you live in europe or the us? if in europe i didnt know they had buffy there! ha ha cool! you had better make snape a sweety at the end or im gonna be super pissed haa haa whyyy snnape??? haa h bunnies and love to ya
bunnyfoo

Great story.....love your sense of humor...hope you post more soon....can't wait to see how it ends.....Keep up the good work. :D