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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person deblovesdragon
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My first thought was, \"Oh that is so funny.\" Quickly followed by my second thought, \"Oh that is so sad.\" Especially Ron. Poor love-sick pup. Well, at least he is alive in this fic. Actually it will be neat (yeah, I said \'neat\') to see what you do with all of these characters that you had dead in Understanding.
Cheers dear.
signed,
The Domestic Goddess
person ancientgirl
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I loved Hermione\'s response to Ron. I have to say I used that same response after my brother gave me grief a few years ago regarding a then boyfriend. Men can be sooooo childish. I\'m so axious to read about how they spend their summer, its going to be very interesting to say the least.
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I sure got your attention, didn\'t I? There are plenty of cuter boy-toys than Timberlake. Nuff said...

Great chapter. Good cliffie too. Have the usual rant from Ron and Harry next? Looking forward to it.
Also loved how your Hermione. She was constantly giggling. And she kissed him. Could he have been more shocked. Very fun.

Cheers.
person ancientgirl
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this, its nice to see something with humor. Don\'t get meng, ng, but sometimes its good to laugh while reading something. I can\'t wait to read about Severus living in the muggle world for the summer. This is going to be very interesting.
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far and very funny! Keep up the good work!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 3, Chapter 1... This is FABULOUS, I LOVE your sense of humor!!! I think that my favorite lines are: \"Draco Malfoy has spread the rumor throughout all of Slytherin House, and they, in turn, have spread it through the school. I believe, in fact, that Mr. Potter and Mr. Weasely are beating the living shit out of Malfoy as we speak.\"

I really liked the conversation between Severus & Hermione, funny combined with serious, a perfect balance!!! I also like the kiss, took him totaly by surprise!!!

Can\'t wait to see what Ron & Harry will have to say to Hermione or what they will want to do to Severus!!! Til chapter 2, Deb >^..^<
person moony_reader
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You should totally keep writing this. I\'m definitely in need to a good laugh. So often with Snape and Hermione pairings it ends up beings so serious or dark. You should definitely have fun with this plot. Good work, can\'t wait to read more.
person WriterLady1031
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this one is good! I like how you\'ve set the story up and I\'m interested to see how this one plays out. I hope that you update this one frequently because you\'re off to a good start with this.

Ciao!
person GrrArrg
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!

First of all, I love all your disclaimers and warnings!!! I think that everyone should get the message now!!

Second of all, I love it!!!! What an awesome first chapter! Your sense of humour is so dark and witty, and I love your Hermione\'s train of tht. ht. I just know that this is going to be as good as \'Understanding\'.

Speak soon
Kisses
GrrArrg
person GeekGoddess
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon and often.....nice long juicy chapters....your start is wonderful...I can\'t wait to find out what happens next.