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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person GrrArrg
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HeeHee

\"Why Snape?\"

\"Would you like to see his dick?\"

Hilarious, this is going to be an awesome story and I can\'t wait to see what\'s next!!

I\'m guessing that this is a light comedy, and so I won\'t be crying into my keyboard, like with the other one?

Love ya
Kisses
Grr
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, poor Ron. He couldn\'t get anything else out! Hermione\'s outburst had my dying over here--it\'s probably because I would be pissed off enough to say something like that myself. ^_^

Great story! I hope to read more.

Ciao!
person Tweeky Monkey
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amusing. I\'m pretty bad at reviews, so I\'ll just leave it at that. Keep it up.
person SJL
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oh dear god, I laughed so hard at Hermione\'s outburst I cried. Thank you for this, it\'s a very amusing fic and I\'m enjoying it immensely. And the idea everyone talking about how big Severus\' \"DICK\" must be will keep me giggling for quite some time.
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I love how you have Severus both in and out of character at the same time. Same thing goes formiormione, she has a backbone! I can\'t wait to read more and I hope you update very very very very soon.

In other words: I WANT MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Keep it up!
Tiffany
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"WOULD YOU LIKE TO SEE HIS DICK, RON?\"

Conversation on all sides of her stopped, and at the head table, a suddenly paler-than-normal Potions Master spit his pumpkin juice halfway across the Great .
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I LOVE IT! This is just getting better and better! Keep up the good work!
person moony_reader
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this! It\'s totally hilarious! Not to mention that normally in Snape/Hermione fics everything is so serious and all about Snape\'s sexual mastery over Hermione. I love that you are having fun with this. Keep going! I can\'t wait to read more.
person Cyn
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bows and grovels before the daring author* This is good stuff....GOOOOOD. I giggled, alot. The character of Snape is like...AWESOME!!! MORE DO MORE...NOW! please....*more bowing* PLEASE!!! Great plot, great dialogue...MORE!!! ( and yes, that really is my email!)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 4, Chapter 2... You really meant it when you wrote \" A serious plot with many comedic moments\"!!! What can I say, this was so..... PERFECT!!! Poor Ron is just beside himself!!! I can\'t stop thinking about how everyone must have looked when Hermione yelled: \"WOULD YOU LIKE TO SEE HIS DICK, RON?\" Severus being shocked by that was a FABULOUS visual in itself!!! Can\'t wait to see what you come up with in the next chapter!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person FireBlade
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I was laughing so hard i nearly pissed myself! I love it thus far please keep going i just started reading this and its fabulous! love it ja ne!