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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person Florentia
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE?! I\'LL BEG!!
person mele
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, well i like the story. i just think hermione is being a little too fresh or snarky too soon in the relationship. i realize she\'s not in the greatest of moodut sut she really warmed to the idea very fast! perhaps she\'s been harboring ilicit feelings for quite a while? please up date soon and yes! i am reading \"understanding\" too. aloha, mele
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 5, Chapter 3... Another FANTASTIC chapter My Dear!!! I can just imagine thck Severus felt when Hermione kissed him back!!! I do LOVE how you are adding humor in all the right places, \"Hermione Granger definitely could have lived without ever, ever feeling Draco Malfoy\'s cock\" , \"It\'s not like I said it was small or misshapen or anything! It was a compliment!\" , just to touch on a couple of lines!!!

I do also appreciate the serious aspects of this story, truth be told, I just LOVE the whole thing!!!
Looking forward to MORE!!! Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^<
person GFeather
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has so much potential. Very amusing. Keep it up and keep me giggling. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Da Feather
person eagle33
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definatley a lot lighter than Understanding!
person GrrArrg
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HeeHee!!

I\'ll say it again, HeeHee!!

That was fantastic, One of the funniest things I\'ve read in a good long while!!

I can\'t even tell you my favourite bits like I usually do, becuse the whole chapter was my favourite bit!!

Being on holiday obviously agrees with you!!

Writers block? What writers block??

Kisses
GrrArrg
person GeekGoddess
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL...that was so funny...I am enjoying your story.....its creative and I can honestly believe this Hermione and Severus actually falling for each other.
person ArienAstera
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have read and reviewed Understanding. But I thought you might like one here as well. So here it is: YOU ARE THE BEST EVER AND I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES!! (even if it only two..) --Arien Astera
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am feeling so sorry for Ron. Poor schmuck.
I liked the show that Severus and Hermione put on for the school and Draco. As if Draco could be any match for Severus. HA! Draco\'s a boy. Severus is a MAN! (cue the groovy 70\'s porn music.) No comparison.

Write more soon. This fic of yours is fun!
person Jennifer
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED when Hermione screamed \"WOOULD YOU LIKE TO SEE HIS DICK?!?!?\" IT SO FUNNY!! I almost died laughing!!