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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person GrrArrg
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She\'s back, and bang on target with the funny!!

Things I loved were:

The title: In fact all the chapter ti hav have made me laugh out loud!!

\"Everywhere she went there were snickers and laughs and pointing.....And then she had to deal with the students\" : Hee h




\"Damn you, Zack Morris and your infernal \"pretend-to-yawn-then-put-your-arm-around-the-girl!\" : Damn I miss \'Saved by the bell\'!!

\"I think my neighbors might start to worry if they keep seeing me with a grown man dressed as a bat.\": She\'s fiesty!!

\"\'I\'ll Be Nicer When You\'re Smarter.\'\" : Just about sums him up I think!!

I can\'t wait for more of this fab story and I demand, In my capacity as Queen Dork that you write more soon!!

Love and Kisses
GrrArrg
person FireBlade
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Hermione, that was a little angst-ie I liked it tho gotta go love it!
person Gin
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so sorry to read about your dad. I just wanted you to know that I love this fic so far... will be waiting patiently for the next installment. take care, and hope to read more from you in the future.
person spaz141
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kinda quirky, different from your other story and fun. Thanks.

We\'ve talked about death in your other story, just know that dealing with loss doesn\'t really get easier more like how you deal with it changes. 17 years later, I still miss my mom like it was yesterday, the grief felt is different. Don\'t rush your grief, IMHO it takes a lifetime to process.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweetie, don\'t be sorry!!! I know that I have been even more sad since Easter & am not looking forward to the 1st Mother\'s Day without my mom!!! Please know that I\'m thinking of you & sending hugs your way!!! Deb >^..^<
person Victoria
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::plot bunnies marked with Neville/Snape frollick merrily in the courtyard under Minerva, flying on a broomstick, wearing plaid socks::
person Cordelia
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, ths fas fabulous. I was doubled over laughing at Ron dumbstruck and Hermione with her dick line.

Keep up the good work...I\'ll be waiting (patiently, of course!) for the next update.
person Victoria
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::stomps Draco into the hardpan clay soil of Alabama:: Dieee wretch! Eat green jelly beans and puke, ye great tosser of a wanker!

::enjoys herself muchly::

I like that youre portraying Snape as more... human, and as a being with feelings, without making him into a sobbing git. ::fiddles her brit insult encyclopedia:: And to acknowledge that Draco would not be approving of the relationship is a good thing, too. Ye\'ve got balls, oh great writer, you! Now: would snape date a mudblood? Is he getting over it, or is she just an exception?
person FireBlade
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No worries. Hey I porcrastinate like Hell, and you have REASONS i dont LOL. So take all the time that you need
FireBlade
person Emery
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is great, i loved when hermione shouted that out in the great hall, a beautiful scene!