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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person GrrArrg
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A thousand apologies!!

I can\'t believe I forgot to read your new chapter, I am the worst friend ever!!

Things I loved:

\"In the future he may have to let go of his personal I-hate-Know-It-Alls grudges\" - That\'s our Sev

\"And not the happy Beach Boys kind of endless summer, either.\" - *sigh* I have always had a weakness for the Beach Boys!!

person Bambu
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hideously afraid that you\'ve modeled Margaret Granger after me.... I\'m endlessly enthusiastic. And I\'m sure we don\'t know one another. It must mean there are more of us out there... Poor Severus, Poor Hermione. I\'m sure it will be an interesting summer.
person ancientgirl
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I have to say, I hate reading stories that are too angsty or too humorous. But, your story is so perfect. I mean its not too funny so its perfect. I love the reaction Severus had to the Grangers, and I love the little conversation Hermione was having with herself when she was looking at Severus\' reflection. Very nice. Please update us soon.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 8, Chapter 5... Another GREAT chapter!!! I LOVE how he acted when caught by Albus!!! Seems to me that these 2 are really starting to take to each other more than they ever expected to!!! The part on the train shows that she at least cares about him*
person ancientgirl
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. This is such a fun story and I love how easy they are around each other. I loved the flustered Hermione and I especially loved theallyally amused Severus.
person Sare Liz
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing. It\'s lovely, and I can\'t wait to see how the two interact in a different arena.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 7, Chapter 4... I can\'t wait to find out which one of them will admit their feelings for the other first!!! They just need to allow themselves to let the feelings be accepted for what they are!!!

I LOVE that shirt!!! I can just picture him in it, PERFECT!!!

As always looking forward to your next update!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want that t-shirt too! Thanks for the update.
person ancientgirl
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Boy am I glad you updated this. I hate seeing good stories abondoned. I hope things are better for you and you will be updating more. I love their banter. Great job.
person vblum12
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is wonderful! completely wonderful! i swear i cried because i laughed so hard from hermione\'s exclamation! i can\'t wait for more