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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person ArienAstera
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I don\'t know if its an insult to them or not, but they are so *cute* together (said in a very squealy voice). And I can relate with Hermione\'s view on clothes and nail polish. I have only one skirt that I bought for a weddiwhenwhen I also got my nails done for the first time professionally - and loved it) and yet my favorite clothing are those big poofy victorian style dresses. Probably won\'t ever buy one though :) Ah well, great chapter!!

ArienAstera
person spaz141
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can I be your fourth or maybe fifth favourite minion? Great fun...only you could make me visualize Hermione and Lavendar talking at a GAP. Thanks for the update.
person Paige
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVE IT!!!! I can\'t wait to see how this turns out, and you can bet I\'ll be checking back often, hoping that you\'ve updated!! Lots of love, Paige.
person Amanda
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!
realy great AND funny story..
the -dick- part was great! :D
post soon, please

love,
amanda
person Kana
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That shirt that Hermione gave Severous reminds me of a shirt I own, \'cept that on my shirt it reads \"I\'ll try being nicer, if you\'ll try being smarter.\" I liked your story and I hope that you\'ll continue it soon.
person pyewacket
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please write more with the parents!! Deliciously dark Severus meets the shiny, happy Grangers. I love it!!!
person GrrArrg
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee

Great chapter!! I loved:

\"Please don
person spaz141
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ie the the Grangers! You are too funny. Thanks for updating.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 9, Chapter 6... I really am enjoying this story!!! I LOVE how bSeveSeverus & Hermione continue to carry on their inner conversations & the one with Hermione figuring that she was in love/lust with him was PERFECT!!!

Her parents really are happy people*
person azulkan2
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Love how they actually like each other but keep denying it. And Severus with motion sickness. Wonder what else they have in common.
Sorry about your fathers passing. Hope that RL is better now.
As I said before, great story, looking forward to more soon.