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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person spaz141
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So funny and yet very sad (the pregnancies problems of Margaret). I almost peed my pants at the thought of Severus stuck for a summer in a Winnie the Pooh bedroom. LOL!
Thanks for the update.
person laceyweasley
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonerful story! Please continue. If I was a witch I would buy what I liked regardless of size, too. That was an excellent everyday idea. Why didn\'t JKR think of that when it came to the Weasley Clan.

person fresh8
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is SOOOOOO hilarious. I enjoy this story so much I actually laugh out loud. well i do hope ypdatpdate soon. by the way you have great dialogue. and good references to all things \"muggle\"
person ArienAstera
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter too!! I was getting ready to bust out in tears (of laughter) when Hermione looked through all his wrongly sized clothes. Oh that was great!! We all love a practical, bargain-buying man, though, don\'t we? And I\'m probably dierinering a hidden death wish for letting this information out, but I really hate David Boreanaz and I don\'t see how anyone could think he was attractive in any way, whatsoever. So I\'m going to have to disagree with Hermione (and you, and tons of other people) on that one *Let the beatings commence!!* So, I guess I\'ll see you next chapter,
ArienAstera
person Meghan
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. They are just too funny ante tte together, and that t shirt was perfect...and so is the image of Snape in Gap. Hope you can post more soon.
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great sotry so far. I couldnt stop reading it Now i want more. I hope you update very soon :-D
person ancientgirl
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the interaction between Severus and Hermione. They are both trying to convince themselves that they aren\'t attracted to the othet itt its not working very well is it. Please keep up the updates.
person GrrArrg
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m here!!

Great chappie as always. Things I loved were:


he still had his reservations about Bob, dentist by day and bodybuilder by night - HeeHee

\"Of course, Mum. How long could it take to pick out a wardrobe which I fear will strongly resemble Simon Cowell\'s?\" - Oh no please dont let him dress like Simon Cowell!!

\"Shut up, Weird Hair.\" - Officially the crappiest attempt at an insult ever!!

Kisses
GrrArrg
person Zephyr
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Babe You are so awesome! ths chapter was Great!!!!

I can\'t wait for more. oh and more hot smut is coming soon in Careful {grin}!!!!

keep it coming!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 10, Chapter Seven: Basic Thuganomics...

I hope you know that I LOVE you too!!! You have written yet another FABULOUS chapter & the title is PERFECT!!! I really like the way you are writing the entire situation between Severus & Hermione & her parents (I ADORE her mother)!!! At least Mrs. Granger likes Severus which is a good thing because I don\'t see Hermione giving up Severus to be with Harry;-)

The whole bit with Lavender was GREAT!!! You couldn\'t have picked a better person for them to have to put on a showing for!!! I am so looking forward to one of their kisses going above & beyond the point of no return!!!

It is nice to know that both of them have feelings for the other!!! I think they compliment each other very well & both of them would have an extremely difficult time finding someone that they would be more compatible with!!!

Looking foward to chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
P.S., Is Edge even more WOW!! per person than he is on t.v.?!?